Your tone work looks great with these colors! I love how such a subtle change can add so much mood to an already great piece of art!
This was a stirring comic, and a great finale to Swan's tournament arc. It's got me legitimately hyped for what's next, something new and different but still very Swan I'm sure! The poster art for Giselle is absolutely gorgeous.
I guess my one tiny gripe is that MEGRE himself didn't seem very important to the plot, other than being someone who could tell Swan things about herself that she needed to hear. Like he was a perfect candidate for the job, being a detective who would do the legwork to find out what he needs to know about his dates, and maybe it's hard to know exactly how he would act with only a few comics under his belt. Like I said, tiny gripe. Sometimes you just need to tell a specific story, and your opponent's character can be the conduit rather than being a determining factor, I guess.
I thought this comic was stunning and engaging from start to finish. I loved looking at the love and care you put into your backgrounds, which is especially impressive under a one week deadline! The colors played together nice to set a mood and communicate everything you wanted us to feel, the dialogue felt natural and meaningful, and I love seeing Crikey pop up, reminding us of how this all started and how important that relationship is to Swan.
I ship Pascaline with ballet. OTP 🙌 Excited for more!!!
This was a stirring comic, and a great finale to Swan's tournament arc. It's got me legitimately hyped for what's next, something new and different but still very Swan I'm sure! The poster art for Giselle is absolutely gorgeous.
I guess my one tiny gripe is that MEGRE himself didn't seem very important to the plot, other than being someone who could tell Swan things about herself that she needed to hear. Like he was a perfect candidate for the job, being a detective who would do the legwork to find out what he needs to know about his dates, and maybe it's hard to know exactly how he would act with only a few comics under his belt. Like I said, tiny gripe. Sometimes you just need to tell a specific story, and your opponent's character can be the conduit rather than being a determining factor, I guess.
I thought this comic was stunning and engaging from start to finish. I loved looking at the love and care you put into your backgrounds, which is especially impressive under a one week deadline! The colors played together nice to set a mood and communicate everything you wanted us to feel, the dialogue felt natural and meaningful, and I love seeing Crikey pop up, reminding us of how this all started and how important that relationship is to Swan.
I ship Pascaline with ballet. OTP 🙌 Excited for more!!!
I hate starting this off with a nitpick, but the second panel of the first page has Swan saying MEGRE is tall, but the horizon line suggests we're looking up at her. So either she's staring at MEGRE's magnificent robo-chest, which we are looking out of, or you just didn't realize the inherent irony of the composition of this panel XD
Okay, onto actually important business. I really love the care you've been putting into all of these backgrounds. Reusing the same shots definitely made that easier, I'm sure, but it's still impressive and makes your comics feel really grounded. I also see how you're using spot blacks, and I'm really enjoying your approach. I'd encourage you to push it even more into an almost graphic design direction rather than just comic art. idk if that makes any sense, but I'm not sure how else to describe it.
This whole tournament has been great, and I think your "experiment" with it has been a success for me! I'm invested in this investigation, and look forward to more of it! I want to know what happened to Harriet!!!
Okay, onto actually important business. I really love the care you've been putting into all of these backgrounds. Reusing the same shots definitely made that easier, I'm sure, but it's still impressive and makes your comics feel really grounded. I also see how you're using spot blacks, and I'm really enjoying your approach. I'd encourage you to push it even more into an almost graphic design direction rather than just comic art. idk if that makes any sense, but I'm not sure how else to describe it.
This whole tournament has been great, and I think your "experiment" with it has been a success for me! I'm invested in this investigation, and look forward to more of it! I want to know what happened to Harriet!!!
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