FACT: The phrase, \"Play time is over\" was used twice in the fights of Crazybee vs. Gideon and SlasherX vs. Joe Diesel during the first round of VOID Tournament 1

playtime is over SHOULD be the VOID motto.  Nice stuff though,  I agree with the action poses comment though.  try sketching out the gestures of people in motion in real life.  it\'ll help

Great work.
No entry from Epsilon sheesh. Hmm, well you didn't draw these for nothing, got me entertained at least.

Keep it up.

thanks guys..... yeah there were some panels that were really bugging me in that one.. thanks for the advice Jar =) .. oh and the reason I didn\'t Ayumi\'s powers against jessie was because the idea kind of flew into my head after my battle with her... thanks guys!! I\'m trying really hard! =)

nice stuff homes.  i like the fact that she goes all shin akuma like.  how she didn\'t do that agents jessie

Haha..."playtime is over" should be the VOID motto.
Lovely stuff.

Ayumi great story progression.  Character development is always a guaranteed way to kick those creativity and entertainment scores up in my book!  Epsilon, I\'m still waiting to see some of your stuff in sequentials.  I really like your character!

There\'ve only been a few times where I\'m surprised by how much story someone can fit into so few pages... this is one of those times.  Very Nice!

AYUMI - great story!  I want to read more

Also, take sometime practice during your downtime to develop more "action" poses.  It will all pay off  Keep up the good work!

ah marley, now i see what you mean...