The Jailbird's Guide to Making Friends / Gold and Talon

The Jailbird's Guide to Making Friends / Gold and Talon

The Jailbird's Guide to Making Friends — Gold and Talon

by TheCydork and Badger

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
We scripted this back during lovechild when we realised these two hadn't actually met yet, but only got around to actually Doing it now. This is supposed to be a slow character-driven comic so we're not looking for crits on pacing and such, feel free to comment on anything else though :)

For context, here is Magic Mayhem R1: https://entervoid.com/comic/6400

Script, Thumbs, Inks - Cy
Pencils, Colours, Lettering - Badger
tags: bb, gold, jail, talon




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Flytee
Artist
268 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 15 2021, 09:35 AM
I loved everything about this, really happy to see some Gold & Talon comics, I look forward to seeing this friendship unfold!

Kilcra
Artist
56 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 15 2021, 09:24 AM
I liked this a lot! Talon was super relatable, and I felt his sadness and fear in this new and scary situation. I imagine it must be terrifying to be in a holding cell for the first time, and I think you handled this maturely and intimately. The two characters work off each other so nicely too, they're such opposites. Beautiful colors and lovely lighting as well. Great work on this!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
299 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 12 2021, 06:15 PM
A blossoming friendship.
I love the little detail of Gold flexing his claws when the cuffs come off, Talon flinching away from Gold's hand when the pick is nabbed.
Wonderful all around!!!

RamenBean18
Artist
21 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 12 2021, 04:25 PM
This is such an adorable and really calming comic to read! Great job guys!!! ☺️ Colors are lovely, and the characters are amazing!!

ManDemolition
Artist
4 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 12 2021, 09:12 AM
Always love a bit of extra lore and fluff to flesh out characters.

Can't really say much more beyond the fact that it's very nice, pleasing to see, and easy to read. :)

Platinumartist
Artist
87 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 12 2021, 12:04 AM
That Art is very well constructed!!! Good Job

snager
Artist
209 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 11 2021, 09:59 AM
it's happening. more insight into the lovechild tournament's winner. PLEASE

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Oct 18th, 2021
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