FERN- Haha, nice punchline at the end- definitely a great way to explain an allergic reaction (would Lophii be allergic to Angie if she battled her? XD). I love love your ink work. Such thick fat lines! Really gives off a Persepolis style. Definitely worth checking out if you havent (it's also a movie!) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Persepolis_%28comics%29
Not to mention little Lophii is super mega adorable cute. Dug the style change to indicate it was a flashback. Refreshing to see a battle where actual character interaction/development is going on rather than a duex ex machina battle

DESTRUCTIVENIX- Oh man oh man, I feel ya. I've been so out of the comics making loop I'm still surprised fighters have the time to get this many pages done. Happens to the best of us man. For what was finished, I thought it was pretty awesome. Not often you see many comics that're still traditionally drawn,

Congrats, Fern!

Fern-I liked the cute story, I'm always a sucker for stuff like this. Would love to see more comics of Lophii's childhood someday. Your characters were looking pretty nice but your backgrounds were a little barren. Even some simple shadows could have given them a lot more life!

DestructiveNix-That first panel on the first page was the strongest I've seen from you, I hope you're able to do a comic that looks like that someday. I thought it was cool that you and Fern had the same sort of story theme going on here. There's not too much for me to comment on due to the unfinished nature of the comic, it may benefit you to focus on doing 1 page a week and just do a short 4 page comic so you can get something finished out.

Thaaaaaanks guuuuiseee!

Pyras: It was indeed on purpose, I wanted to differentiate it from the "here and now".

Angie: Yeah I think it must be hard for her. Also looking forward for your comment!

Fern: Good lines for the most part they seemed a bit too thick during the flashback, I'm assuming that may have been intentional but it may have backfired. Funny pay-off though and that really counts!

Nix: The 1st page has a really strong first panel and your use of the colors on it were great. It's a shame you couldn't take that same level to all the other panels, but you have a bit of a complete little story here anyway, and that's an accomplishment on its own.

Good job, girls

aaah the bar was fine. Shoosh you.  

Lophii must be devastated that she'll never be able to hug Angie without having a severe allergic reaction! haha

Will have a proper comment for you guys hopefully on my next day off from work.

Exactly. This month kicked my ass. I've been drawing and sewing commissions between nervous break downs. BUT. I pieced it together and uploaded it, so let's hope.

(hence the shoddy job on the bar on page 1 )

Don't worry! I kinda every time I do a void comic when it seems I will have lots of free time and then the Unexpected hits me and it all goes to pot. I think its a curse or someth

shit, there's no way I can finish. I've been working to get my fees paid and haven't had much time for art, and what I've had time for has been purely for destress. >< on with the panic. Shit. I'm sorry.

LOL yep!

Entourage interaction~