tdkgunghoul:
I like the gestures and mimics on you characters.
But you should be more consistent about your shading.
Elle and her companion often had some shadows on them but Houma and the BG had none.
Some more shadows would make the Pages look way less sterile.

Napaea:
Yur style is really sweet, maybe a bit immature but it has character.
And i like how you lining is dynamic.
But there is no shading at all?
In my opinion comics allways look kind of unfinished if there is no shading.
Maybe you could use some hatching or grayscales, thats an easy and fast way.

I was really confused about the "fight" of Elle against that Beast.
At first it seemed to bite her arm but at the 5th page it engulfs her up to her head exept the arm it seems to bite in the 3rd page @__@
If you draw a fight, let it lokke like one.
It doesnt looks like Elle were resisting against beeing eaten or if, i hadnt noticed...

Uploaded. x.x

i know this will be promising

Uploaded. This comic's shooting-at-people quota brought to you by a goddamn sexual tyrannosaurus.

can't wait!

Everytime I want to take a break, my hand moves on it's own, clicking and searching umtil I have another battle on a deadline.


Help.