Happy Australian New Year (Kinda)! 24 Hour Disaster Challenge / HR99

Happy Australian New Year (Kinda)! 24 Hour Disaster Challenge — HR99

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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
24 hour challenge following these guidelines:
-3 pages
-mono color
-on New Year's Eve (somewhere)
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Durianknuckle
Artist
58 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 30 2023, 03:41 AM
New Year’s Eve to squeeze in 3 pages! You are beasts!!!πŸ’ͺπŸ™ˆ

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
568 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 21 2023, 11:41 AM
Fantastic 3 pagers! As always I'm a fan of Pizza's humor.

snager
Artist
415 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 8 2023, 01:18 PM
Pizza, you know I'm a sucker for 'the cursed tv shows you watch when you're asleep.' and you hit the nail on the head. the answer being 'i'm slowly being fused to the floor' had me gafah. the choice in unsettling pink was also tops. very dense series of interactions and events yet you kept it to just 4 panels per page and the information flowed very easily. you should be teaching me this >:U

Null, I can tell you were going for a sweet and simple story. you have a habit of zooming in on objects and scenes and giving everything thick chunky lines so it's harder to tell what is closest and get a sense of depth. this affect should be saved for emotional close ups on body language and expressions, then you shall need to find a way to represent objects that are in the mid, far, and back ground. example: on page two, the second panel where their characters bottoms of their faces are visible only. why would you want to hide their eyebrows from us? part of their eyes are hidden too, which is the best way we have to tell the characters apart. a craftsmanship problem too: the word bubbles underwent meiosis on page 2.
just some thing to think about while you develop and hone your style.
I appreciate that you didn't try to go too big with your first 24 hour battle! everything looks evenly polished and you picked a short and sweet story for just 3 pages. very smart!

Pizza Man
Artist
77 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 8 2023, 11:12 AM
Daaang I don't think I deserved to win by that much what's this about? (- ~ - ' ) GG Null I really liked your side a lot! I hope more people interact with my robots like you chose to. Action and comedy are fun but Void needs more comics with heart too. Good luck on your battle with Energy!

Bobert
Artist
249 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 1 2023, 04:57 AM
Pizza yours was goofy. Let's see you do more comics in the future. Maybe push past your current 3 pages in a day score for 24 hour battles, you did swell with the limitations you gave yourself.

Null, yours was nice and sweet, slightly abrupt ending but pretty nice comic. Can't wait to see you do more in time.

Firefly
Artist
72 comments
# 1   Posted: Dec 31 2022, 08:20 AM
I love seeing the results of 24 hour comics. Both of you made really great quality comics!

Pizza Man - Your comics always have great humor in them and this one was no different. I also love the creativity of your robots.

Null - Your comic was wholesome and on theme. I like you panel layouts!

Good luck to you both and happy new year!

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Regular Match
Drawing Time: 24 hours
Ended: Jan 7th, 2023
Votes Cast: 11
Page Views: 714
Winner: Pizza Man
 

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