Still glad these were able to go up!
I miss those sweet inks and gritty backgrounds you do Radji!
Bobert It's pretty baller of you to push through art block to get this done! Kuddos!
I think you'd do pretty well in collabs to boost your skills.
Shitty City Crap Scrap / Quicksilver vs. Marie
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Sep 24 2022, 12:37 PM
# 3
Posted:
Sep 21 2022, 02:10 PM
I think you both did well regarding your circumstances, they were fun reads.
Bobert- I like how your style works with your storytelling, but I think you could have combined a few of these pages (using the same panels though) to make it a little less empty looking. I also think that you should get a free art program and add speech bubbles and text with that, the pencil text was very difficult to read. I thought the panel borders were quite nice and varied and worked well with the story you told. I love Quicksilver's personality so much, I really want to see you keep doing comics on the site!
Radji- Obviously you know that your comic is unfinished, so there's not much to say about the quality, though what you did get inked looks quite lovely. The horror vibes are nicely done, and I love the angles you used in your pages. I'd love to see a continuation with this for Marie's story.
Bobert- I like how your style works with your storytelling, but I think you could have combined a few of these pages (using the same panels though) to make it a little less empty looking. I also think that you should get a free art program and add speech bubbles and text with that, the pencil text was very difficult to read. I thought the panel borders were quite nice and varied and worked well with the story you told. I love Quicksilver's personality so much, I really want to see you keep doing comics on the site!
Radji- Obviously you know that your comic is unfinished, so there's not much to say about the quality, though what you did get inked looks quite lovely. The horror vibes are nicely done, and I love the angles you used in your pages. I'd love to see a continuation with this for Marie's story.
# 2
Posted:
Sep 19 2022, 09:07 PM
For my part, I want to thank Radji too for allowing me to extend the battle by one week, back on the original iteration of this battle. I was suffering through a writers block that crippled the productivity and overall quality of the pages and sometimes I was up late working incredibly slowly on the thing.
I did learn that I'm able to do a lot more pages than I assumed I could, so I feel grateful and optimistic about future comics to come.
(I want to do a more polished version of my comic regardless of outcome as a beyond battle as I was running short on time to submit but that's neither a promise or a guarantee)
I did learn that I'm able to do a lot more pages than I assumed I could, so I feel grateful and optimistic about future comics to come.
(I want to do a more polished version of my comic regardless of outcome as a beyond battle as I was running short on time to submit but that's neither a promise or a guarantee)
# 1
Posted:
Sep 19 2022, 07:03 PM
I want to thank Bobert again for agreeing to postpone the battle after I injured my wrist again.
I didn't want to default again.
The wrist is still busted, so no miracles here, still unfinished, but I wanted the story to at least be understandable.
Might post a properly finished version later... But Void battle gonna be very rare for me now.
I'll be focused on wrapping up my main characters' stories.
I didn't want to default again.
The wrist is still busted, so no miracles here, still unfinished, but I wanted the story to at least be understandable.
Might post a properly finished version later... But Void battle gonna be very rare for me now.
I'll be focused on wrapping up my main characters' stories.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Sep 26th, 2022
Votes Cast:
8
Page Views:
619
Winner:
Radji
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