Golden: I really loved getting to learn about swords . and how you draw everyone is so beautiful. Like the count's hairy human arms and also very realistic looking bug face. and Cairo's big ol man tiddies. gorgeous. you got a little ambitious for your time allotment I think, but the sketches are still a treat and I can still tell what's going on, so it didn't hurt you too bad
Pizza man: I like the idea of the characters walking through a circus. very unusual circumstances. Also I believe you are taking the opportunity to continue an ongoing story. I couldn't tell what the two main character's deals were though. in one panel, one of them seems to be thinking of selling the Count out for the bounty, but then in the very next breath jumps to push him out of the way, allowing themself to be trapped instead? :?
Bark vs. Bite, Round 1 / Cairo Rae vs. Burmeister
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Oct 26 2021, 10:22 AM
# 8
Posted:
Oct 26 2021, 10:07 AM
Thank you everyone for the sweet comments ; 0 ;
And Pizza Man, your words mean a lot to me and I’m happy to have fought you!
And Pizza Man, your words mean a lot to me and I’m happy to have fought you!
# 7
Posted:
Oct 24 2021, 07:49 PM
You know what they say if you can’t eat em join em ;^)
Seriously though Golden your art doesn’t get enough love your stuff is fantastic! I love pretty much everything about this comic and absolutely adore how you wrote Burmeister. You’ve always been one of my favorite artists on this website and I’ve always wanted to fight you, while I wish that could have happened much later I’m honestly happy I got to at all. Thank you so much for an amazing fight!
Seriously though Golden your art doesn’t get enough love your stuff is fantastic! I love pretty much everything about this comic and absolutely adore how you wrote Burmeister. You’ve always been one of my favorite artists on this website and I’ve always wanted to fight you, while I wish that could have happened much later I’m honestly happy I got to at all. Thank you so much for an amazing fight!
# 6
Posted:
Oct 24 2021, 01:34 PM
GOLDIE-
Your inks are absolutely gorgeous! Love the sense of movement and how your action scenes flow. Your art style is such a treat to look at, and the character interactions are so natural and enjoyable! Loved the ending, I can't wait to see what more you've got planned for your boy!!
PIZZA MAN-
I really liked the dynamic angles you used on this! the cameos were fun and your expressions are pretty neat! The lines are a bit messy but I can make out what's going on just fine. It was an entertaining read, looking forward to the BB!
Your inks are absolutely gorgeous! Love the sense of movement and how your action scenes flow. Your art style is such a treat to look at, and the character interactions are so natural and enjoyable! Loved the ending, I can't wait to see what more you've got planned for your boy!!
PIZZA MAN-
I really liked the dynamic angles you used on this! the cameos were fun and your expressions are pretty neat! The lines are a bit messy but I can make out what's going on just fine. It was an entertaining read, looking forward to the BB!
# 5
Posted:
Oct 24 2021, 01:03 AM
Pizza Man- alright come thru Pizza Man! I found your comic very entertaining and you made the style work.
Golden- I was enjoying your beautiful art and waas absorbed in the comic but disappointed by the sudden drop in quality. I appreciate that it is time sensitive however.
Golden- I was enjoying your beautiful art and waas absorbed in the comic but disappointed by the sudden drop in quality. I appreciate that it is time sensitive however.
# 4
Posted:
Oct 20 2021, 10:12 PM
Golden: first time seeing a comic from you, I'm a fan. Everyone and specially Stacy looks *chef kiss*.
Pizza: Seeing every contestant in your comic was cool! Hope you can finish the next comics! You seem to be cooking a cool story.
Pizza: Seeing every contestant in your comic was cool! Hope you can finish the next comics! You seem to be cooking a cool story.
# 3
Posted:
Oct 18 2021, 10:21 AM
Golden, your figure work, acting, and action are all fantastic. I really enjoyed this light hearted premise. Even the unfinished panels were a fun bit of process to see, and still read clearly.
Pizzaman, good job getting the whole thing roughed out and all the dialog in so this was readable. The goofy premise didn't hit for me, though. For my money, your opponent wrote your character much better.
Pizzaman, good job getting the whole thing roughed out and all the dialog in so this was readable. The goofy premise didn't hit for me, though. For my money, your opponent wrote your character much better.
# 2
Posted:
Oct 17 2021, 07:20 AM
I'm looking forward to your BB, Pizza! I like mantises in general and Count Burmeister being a weird non-standard vampire makes him cooler.
I love the amount of polish you brought to most of your pages, Golden. This is like really pleasing to the eyes.
I love the amount of polish you brought to most of your pages, Golden. This is like really pleasing to the eyes.
# 1
Posted:
Oct 17 2021, 12:10 AM
Apologies to everyone I didn't finish the story. I'll be posting a BB with the rest of it this week but I hope what I managed to do at least makes a little sense.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Oct 24th, 2021
Votes Cast:
16
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973
Winner:
Goldie
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Goldie out here making oc's even sexier! Such nice action scenes. I can't wait to see your next match! Go team woof!
Pizzaman I can't wait for my turn against you! I enjoy your humor and rough style. Hope you like terrible jokes my dude