Sordid / Gray and Miller

Sordid — Gray and Miller

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snager
Artist

415 comments

# 12 Posted: Aug 1 2020, 05:21 PM

I was promised porn and I can attest: this was very pornographic. it was very angsty, though. but it was easy enough to get into, giving us some idea of what the character's Deals are. thanks for this!

Kozispoon
Artist

1211 comments

# 11 Posted: Jul 31 2020, 11:18 PM

I can agree with the comments below. If anyone can weave smut and story together its it'd be you. This adds such a sordid (hyuk hyuk) layer to Miller and Gray's relationship I really like. Raises so many questions as to their respective loyalties and standards. I really REALLY hope it gets explored and addressed in Arma!

ArtsandGoodies
Artist

566 comments

# 10 Posted: Jul 30 2020, 09:51 PM

This is a good dramatic scene and a nice comic shen. you have a good way of weaving smut into actual stories with both this and your last greece comic.

Rivana
Artist

368 comments

# 9 Posted: Jul 30 2020, 07:00 AM

lol Pyras finally cracked after 5evah and made this canon XDDD

Yes, I am all for this DRAMA! Poor Hunter though -_-

Symon_says
Artist

167 comments

# 8 Posted: Jul 29 2020, 02:45 PM

I always wondered about Gray and Miller's relationship. Perhaps current events will resolve these long forgotten memories once and for all. Though for the benefit of whom is the question. Reminds me of the original Ghostbusters and the haunted bed sheets.

Pizza Man
Artist

79 comments

# 7 Posted: Jul 28 2020, 12:20 PM

I really have to stop glazing over thumbnails the NSFW stuff caught me way off guard lol! Didn't detract from my reading experience though, good short comic.

Stormcrow
Artist

68 comments

# 6 Posted: Jul 26 2020, 08:17 PM

*distressed Hunter noises* I swear to god Pyras better get into Arma so we can address this in canon, lol.

Also, if anyone's interested in Hunter's reaction to all this, feel free to suffer through my writing: https://fatelines.weebly.com/faithful.html

Fluffsamasprime
Artist

570 comments

# 5 Posted: Jul 26 2020, 03:25 PM

How lewd~!

Footini
Artist

359 comments

# 4 Posted: Jul 26 2020, 12:08 AM

Gray going out with a bang.

TheCydork
Artist

606 comments

# 3 Posted: Jul 25 2020, 10:08 PM

BLESS Pyras for agreeing to make this canon. This is such a great comic Shen I just *chef’s kiss*. Really messed up but in the best way.

Animeshen
Artist

1490 comments

# 2 Posted: Jul 25 2020, 07:51 PM

OH ALSO please assume this takes place BEFORE Arma 2020 prelude- sometime just aftee arma 2014.

Animeshen
Artist

1490 comments

# 1 Posted: Jul 25 2020, 07:23 PM

to be clear, Pyras had NOTHING to do with this comic but he DID agree that it's canon to Miller's story and THATS why it's in Miller's archive, even though it was exclusively my work.
I did this in ONE day for fun, and as such, theres basically no backgrounds so please don't crit this, it doesnt exist to be critiqued, it's just for story.