Derrick Tod vs. Clio

Derrick Tod vs. Clio

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Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 46   Posted: Feb 14 2010, 11:12 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments!
Hopefully I'm actually delividng next week!

Sixtem: It's goo to hear that! this time around it was 100% my own words, against 2008 which were proof read by Kure, for which I'm very grateful! I hope to not disappoint again!

AmazingDavid: Thanks man! I've been wanting to do a comic tutorial just to explain how I do stuffs, though I wonder if you'll have anything to learn, since your stuff is so fucking badass!

Thanks again and off to next week!

JoshuaEliGilley
Artist
462 comments
# 45   Posted: Feb 12 2010, 06:36 PM
ZSA hopefully you get more time next week! Char. is really interesting.

YAZ, watch out Johnny Bs comin for ya!

luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 44   Posted: Feb 9 2010, 03:03 PM
Hopefully this wont happen next round? Though I must say, Page 4 was my fav!

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 43   Posted: Feb 9 2010, 08:18 AM
You get to live- THIS ROUND !

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 42   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 06:41 PM
This is the comic that will win the SDT.

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 41   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 04:32 PM
Zsabre - Pretty much everything looked like it would be fantastic if finished. Your story seems a lot more solid than usual, and your dialogue and writing has improved by leaps and bounds. Did you get somebody to proofread it, or are you just getting more comfortable with it? I hope we get to see a finished comic in the next round!

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 40   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 03:57 PM
I love your art dude, your art style kicks so much ass its not even funny! Its strange seeing it unfinished though, I'm a bit spoiled by your RockStar pages :D

Amaloo
Artist
76 comments
# 39   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 03:55 PM
I love the "She's not really a bad person" ass shot.
Sweet.

amazingdavid
Artist
441 comments
# 38   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 03:54 PM
Z..so so so so lucky..

One thing thaat Idid find intersting about this was seeing what your process is for drawing a page. I need to learn perspective lines man...my cities be on some bullshit...I'd take a tutorial form you anyday...

good luck in the next round I hope to see a finished piece...

justarhymes
Artist
654 comments
# 37   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 01:28 PM
Haha, Z, you buttface!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 36   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 12:32 PM
Agreed. I liked the sketchiness and could follow pretty good. I completlely understand a week is pretty damn short.
I know yer gonna rock it next round...if you're not being held up again.
It's a pretty good story so most of the higher points go to that. Not much quality going on but strong creativity mah man.
Good luck next time!

Yaz, don't sweat it...it happens. I'll just consider it a suicide. ;)

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 35   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 11:21 AM
The linework was pretty creative, as always with you ZSA - the beginning showed some promise

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 34   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 11:16 AM
There's really not much I can say crit wise, but I hope to see something finished from you in the next round.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 33   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 08:07 AM
I know :(
This week just wasnt letting me draw this. I started thursday, and had to stop on friday.
I tried t oleave at least the story told, since that's what I had ready to go.
Sorry everyone!

And Yaz, win that one at WfA.

Elio
48 comments
# 32   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 07:40 AM
Zsa - I like your finished stuff better. ;-(

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 31   Posted: Feb 8 2010, 05:06 AM
Yaz, as soon as this is up you'll notice you wouldn't need much to beat me.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 30   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 10:44 PM
Hey everyone, I said knock it off. No more drama.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 29   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 10:41 PM
I know not many people like WFA here, but could we please not turn it into a WFA vs VOID battle D:. I also go to WFA, and I want to start going here, and I like aspects of both personally. Sorry if I'm a little out of line in saying this ^^;

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 28   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 10:36 PM
there are things more important than battles, true. but in your case, that other thing is a battle on another site. where's the importance there? another site which is really just going about their normal business & not holding a special event by the way like we are here.

now, if you're so concerned about 'having a chance,' that means you're too caught up in the notion of this being a game & you're not worried about growing as an artist, which is the important point of all of this. if that's not important to you than jack's right, wfa's for you. if the glory of victory in a comic battle only a handful of people on the internet will read is all you're after, you really shouldn't question other people's priorities, junior.

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 27   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 10:17 PM
Yeah, you should totally feel sorry for people who don't understand how another shitty WFA battle is more important than your premier comic against a professional artist who's taken time out of his schedule to draw a comic against you. Try again.

Elyan
Artist
132 comments
# 26   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 09:53 PM
zsabreuser: Sorry Yaz, you never had a chance
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haha thats some of my point.

yeah guys it was a bad idea to not make sure of my time shedule.
i'm aware that it wasn´t a nice move but there are things that are definetely more important than a battle you don´t have a chance on (i think some of you can imagine things which count as more important, if not i´m sorry for you).

btw assholecomments doesn´t make things any better you know?

and jack: i do what i want ;) *hug

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 25   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 09:46 PM
I guess nothing will be surfacing, I'm really disappointed actually =(.

But at the very least we get to see awesome Zsa art and a guarantee he is going to the next round? :D? :D? ... D:

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 24   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 09:16 PM
I'm sure Yaz gets the point, really no reason to continue with this guys.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 23   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 09:14 PM
"oh hey guys, sorry i didn't give a shit & didn't care to mention until now, but i had this other sorta battle thing as part of another sites ongoing run of the mill shenanigans despite this being a tourney & my first battle here & all. here! go look at it! i spent all my time i should have been using to work on this, to do that instead. Let me post the link here so you can go over & look at that so you can understand why i halfassed my stuff for you guys."

loyalty is one thing. poor planning is another. but plugging your battles from elsewhere when you're threatening to default here? that's lame. asshole moves beget asshole comments.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 22   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 09:05 PM
he got scurred of Zsa.

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 21   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 09:02 PM
Yeah Qyz, it's not in any way asinine to get involved in one site's biggest tournament then go fuck off to do some average bullshit at another site. I think you're the only one with any confusion as to who the real asshole is here.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 20   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 07:19 PM
while SDT is a big thing, and you should try to schedule better, don't let assholes get to you. You were at WFA first, and I would assume you felt a bit more inclined to do that first, out of loyalty. And to me, I understand that. I'll be disappointed not see anything, albeit sketchy pages, for the SDT.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 19   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 07:14 PM
Sorry Yaz, you never had a chance

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 18   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 07:11 PM
Uploaded.

This is my best comic to date.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 17   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 07:04 PM
dude.
whattachump.

Jack
Artist
225 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 06:22 PM
You should stay at WFA.



Seriously. Don't worry about doing anything here anymore. It'd be for the best.

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 12:44 PM
Aww man dude, I know you can crank out them pages =(

fowlie
Artist
177 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 11:48 AM
You picked a WFA battle over battling Zsa in SDT?  Yaz, you fag.

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 11:44 AM
I guess we cant be friends anymore :(

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 11:32 AM
In the future please be careful with your planning. If you have a prior engagement, it's safest to not take on a battle.

Elyan
Artist
132 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 7 2010, 03:29 AM
Hey guys,

i working on my pages finally but it doesn´t look like i´ll be able to finish them.
there is a big chance for me to default.
btw i worked all the time on this: http://www.warforarcadia.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=51481#51481
my battle at WfA had priority for me, so it swallowed 6 days. the result are 8 pages.

punching out 3 further pages today might be a bit much for me. so don´t be surprised if i default.

sorry zsabreuser. its a honour to fight you but the circumstances make it hard to do justice to our battle.

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 5 2010, 05:55 PM
He's weak....Just push him down some stairs...

aribooboo
Artist
282 comments
# 9   Posted: Feb 5 2010, 05:47 PM
I want hot buckets of murder!

DrasticFantastic
Artist
165 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 5 2010, 01:02 AM
GON' GET CUT BITCH

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 2 2010, 05:32 AM
Fuck! 6 days already!

Red
Council
703 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 1 2010, 10:06 AM
cute couple haha

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 03:10 PM
YAZMAN, use the boost to get through!

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 02:43 PM
They should be up the next day in every round hopefully, as long as there's no technical issues I'll be doing my best to get comics up before class/work.

Elyan
Artist
132 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 02:41 PM
hahaha this will be a spectacular death!

can´t wait for the the feeling when the comics are up!

and thanks angie. I´ll take care of this stuff.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 02:37 PM
http://entervoid.com/board/index.php?topic=11075.msg186023#msg186023

for the newcomer to read!

Good luck you two!

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 31 2010, 02:19 PM
yaz, pull out all the stops!!
zsa, do what you do best.

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