Snowy, this was very cute. I love how you draw Crestwood, and the ending was perfect. Idk if you planned on doing more, but this honestly feels like a perfect way to end her tournament arc XD. Just a poor wishing star dealing with one problem after another! Can't an astral body get a break!? 💖

Buggy: Hope everything's alright! ;A;

Snowy: The way you draw Crestwood is so adorable omg. Also I know it's p simple but I do like what you used for the background, it gave it a very specific mood that I v much enjoy hehe. Poor Asteria can't catch a break Also, the panel layout at the end of page 2 was really rad, you always do such a fun job with that flowy smokey effect!

BUGGY
I think a bunch of us were feeling that burnout near the end of the round robin, and I hope you get some good rest.  When you're ready, I would love to play with Cyrus again.  I think Dungeon Master of Disaster could use a good closing comic, we'll see how that goes.

SNOW
I liked the VN approach you made in this round robin.  It requires less work to make visual assets while maintaining the fun dialog you can plan for an encounter.  And I found Asteria to be quite charming!  Lovely characterization.

I like how you set it up as a visual novel and right when the reader's getting used to that format, you break from it with this super interesting dynamic shot! Makes me think of weirdcore music, like the familiar becoming unfamiliar. Great work!

Loving this Visual novel format for the sdt. Works perfectly for the 'romance'
As always your style is so nice and clean, love how you draw crestwood!

I really enjoy the Visual Novel format, it actually makes me wanna play one with Asteria in it.

you really hammered down the aesthetic vibe for this one, snowy. and, i must say, yours was the only comic that looked really good on my phone, this round. XD it's a totally different experience holding the thing in your hand. makes it feel more like a game. I'm not sure what happened when they both transformed. was there going to be a fight?
anyway, i applaud you for getting experimental, i hope you had fun and learned a lot!  

Buggy! I was so looking forwards to seeing the end of crestwood's arc. hope we see him around some more. maybe he could see Bones again? ;w;

everyone i talked to got super tired by the end of this tournament, so don't feel too bad guys.

Snowy: Life happens, I of all people understand that (dang kiddos)
Very clean work, but lots of corners cut. Gotta admit I'm not a fan of the game setup, it doesn't give alot of opportunities for dynamic shots, basically just highlights dialogue/monologuing. Wish thered been more interaction but I get time was a big issue and you did everything you could to release a clean finished comic so good job!!