really nice intro! I love seeing sci fi characters enter the site. it will be a tough challenge getting Nova's universal translator installed, but if all else fails, she can get duo lingo! Or talk to Pyras' professor/vigilante character. He's a linguist.

you did a ton of recon to make sure your character was making sense in the story of Void City and that's a LOT of work! XD you're gonna fit in here nicely.

Solid comic! Great use of the scroll format for falling, and you showcased Nova's personality really well here. I especially liked the exaggerated, scribbled flashback on the first page. Welcome to Void!

Nova is adorable.  I hope all the good things happen to her and she's going to be okay.
However drama and suffering is more fun to read so I hope more that you get into all the battles.

I looove how you worked with the long scrolling page! When she was falling and breaking through the bottom of the first page, just to continue falling in the next page, it felt like the camera swooped down to see her. Really really cool visual storytelling going on here! Welcome to Void!

Cutie no don't trust the cops :0

Great way to introduce your character Mandemolition!
Congrats on getting Nova in!!

You're more than welcome to punch him; I heard Hank eats veal every day and donates to homophobic churches.

Hank spankum is upsetting. I hate him with a passion, but I love Clayton and Nova

This is so cute and well written!! Alot of these kind of intro comics dont really explain much but this is a creative take in that you lay out all kinds of barriers Nova needs to get over. I loved Clayton listing off all those types of characters in void, I had a good laugh!! Some crit regarding word balloons- Its difficult to read it when you put the dialogue in alot smaller. I get its suppose to be quieter but I really gotta squint. Maybe put it in parenthesis instead? Great job though, love Nova!!

Cute fun story you made here, I enjoyed this a lot, welcome to Void, I look forward to seeing more of your comics, and always remember to have fun while here, my dude.

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Welcome aboard!! Glad to have you!! Can’t wait to see more of your cute characters and comics!! Let’s battle sometime! Love Nova’s design!