Intro Story / Aiz
Critiques & Comments
# 11
Posted:
Oct 27 2020, 03:43 PM
Ah- good tough character, nice. I was a little thrown off by the "right on time" line, at first, since I'm used to reading that before the character acknowledges the others. It's a really small nitpick though, so don't worry too much about it. Def a seems like a good character for sparring matches!
# 10
Posted:
Oct 27 2020, 03:16 PM
I'm liking this gal already. Am gonna love to see how her violent streak contrasts with her upbringing and the shenanigans she's likely to run into because of it. Can't way to see how she brawls!!
# 9
Posted:
Oct 27 2020, 12:52 PM
Welcome to Void and I love her already! She sort of reminds me of an Anastasia type of story but Quentin Tarantino style. Looking forward to seeing more of Aiz!
# 8
Posted:
Oct 24 2020, 09:27 PM
I really like this character! She seems fun, I can't wait to see what comics you make with her!
# 7
Posted:
Oct 23 2020, 11:47 PM
This was a fun read, thank you! Your character is really interesting and I'd love to see more from her and you soon!
# 6
Posted:
Oct 21 2020, 10:58 AM
I love her. good potential laying there! I mean your lines and coloring looks kinda rushed or rough mostly. it suits the character though i think you have a road before you that will pump this to even cooler highs.
# 5
Posted:
Oct 21 2020, 07:02 AM
I love everything about her fight me
# 4
Posted:
Oct 21 2020, 06:19 AM
This is so rad. Also your speed is incredible, to say you did it in like 2 days, the quality is still good and it doesn’t look rushed to me. This functioned well as an intro, showing very clearly that this is a cocky princess on the run, although we still have to refer to the bio to know WHY she is on the run. Sidenote: I love that you gave her those big chunky teeth and make her pretty distinct from how she appears as a princess.
Welcome to Void!
Welcome to Void!
# 3
Posted:
Oct 20 2020, 03:48 PM
Dude i LOVE your lines and color!! Aiz looks hella interesting to battle!
Congrats on getting in so fast, i'm looking forward to your next comics.
Congrats on getting in so fast, i'm looking forward to your next comics.
# 2
Posted:
Oct 20 2020, 03:14 PM
URGE TO FIGHT RISING
# 1
Posted:
Oct 20 2020, 02:56 PM
Congrats on getting in. I made a full crit in the approval email but just wanted to say you got this up so quick it’s really impressive and I’m hype for your battles.
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