hey Sabubu91, the art itself for your character is pretty nice, but his over all design is whack. He kind of looks like a second rate Anime villain rather then someone who will bring the Apocalypse. When designing a character, especially a character inspired by something else, you need to stop and ask yourself
why. Why am I doing the things I am doing?
When I look at this I ask myself the fallowing questions:
Why is Pestilence, the bringer of disease, so healthy and fit with such hansom bone structure and nice hair?
Why would the Christian embodiment of disease wear a Kung Fu uniform? Why does that uniform have huge tuxedo jacket coat tails?
Why no nose, isn't the nose a huge spot for humans to get infections through? Also, why the big elf ears?
Why no horse?
I get the feeling that you just didn't want to have an unattractive character, so Pestilence seems like a really odd choice in that respect.
I hope you get my meaning with all of this