Neither comic was completed, and I know things can come up at the worst possible time sometimes, so I'll make this quick.
Fel: Trying to read the comic backwards made it easier to follow. Did Amp's hair magically disappear on the last two (or rather, the first two?) pages?
Luniara: All I can really think of is that "Apparantly" should be "Apparently".
Murderfest 2014 / AMP vs. The Skinner
Critiques & Comments
# 15
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Sep 12 2014, 07:13 PM
# 14
Posted:
Sep 12 2014, 06:32 PM
This was the least completed completed comic of the rounds. Good luck next time. No comment on both :T
# 13
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Sep 11 2014, 01:15 PM
Fel: Oh, P2 is floating in a bubble. Makes perfect sense. Please make a complete comic next time. I miss them.
Lune: Hey, I was actually able to follow the plot in your comic! I guess you win by default. I've always been a bit of a fanboy when it comes to your artwork, and even your pencils here are real purty. I hope beyond hope that you finish your comic next round. That would make me so happy! <3
Lune: Hey, I was actually able to follow the plot in your comic! I guess you win by default. I've always been a bit of a fanboy when it comes to your artwork, and even your pencils here are real purty. I hope beyond hope that you finish your comic next round. That would make me so happy! <3
# 12
Posted:
Sep 10 2014, 05:44 PM
I totally understand busy schedules and I'm really grateful you guys chose to be a part of this
# 11
Posted:
Sep 9 2014, 08:12 AM
Haha, thanks guys. Sorry about the shit quality. I haven't drawn an actual comic in...well, since 2009? I actually forgot how to use my own comic paper and how I used to make my comic bubbles. DAT bad.
It's a big drawing week for me and we were preparing for a new addition to the family. =) I'm glad I at least managed something to not disappoint.
It's a big drawing week for me and we were preparing for a new addition to the family. =) I'm glad I at least managed something to not disappoint.
# 10
Posted:
Sep 9 2014, 07:47 AM
Glad we got entries for both of you. I was pretty excited for this match up, so I am also kind of disappointed that these were both incomplete.
Fel - I read this forwards the first time... and had NO clue what was going on. Then I saw the comments and read it backwards.... and unfortunately, it did not help very much. You have some great angles and some cool looking action going on, but I wish it had been more complete so that I could better grasp what is actually happening here, and why. Glad you submitted though. I THINK someone died... but it almost looks like they both did.
Luniara - Glad to see you back as well. Your style has really leveled up (I still remember the Capsule Corp. comics!). Like with Fel's comic, I really wish this had been complete. With the minimal lettering being somewhat confusing, it was a little hard to grasp what was happening at first, and i wish we had seen a body, or really anything indicating someone actually died. Like was mentioned earlier, maybe even just making the blood red would have made it more obvious.... but really this one feels more like a death was hinted at... but not necessarily.
Still though, glad to see you both submitted, and good luck!
Fel - I read this forwards the first time... and had NO clue what was going on. Then I saw the comments and read it backwards.... and unfortunately, it did not help very much. You have some great angles and some cool looking action going on, but I wish it had been more complete so that I could better grasp what is actually happening here, and why. Glad you submitted though. I THINK someone died... but it almost looks like they both did.
Luniara - Glad to see you back as well. Your style has really leveled up (I still remember the Capsule Corp. comics!). Like with Fel's comic, I really wish this had been complete. With the minimal lettering being somewhat confusing, it was a little hard to grasp what was happening at first, and i wish we had seen a body, or really anything indicating someone actually died. Like was mentioned earlier, maybe even just making the blood red would have made it more obvious.... but really this one feels more like a death was hinted at... but not necessarily.
Still though, glad to see you both submitted, and good luck!
# 9
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 10:22 PM
toobad sosad.
# 8
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 05:48 PM
fel: i dont even know whats happening here- but i'm glad you put in the effort papi <3
mel: the word bubbles for skinner speaking could have used tails, then it woulda been easier to understand that she was speaking to someone else. maybe having added some red on that last panel to show it was blood would have been nice too! proud of you for coming back!!!
mel: the word bubbles for skinner speaking could have used tails, then it woulda been easier to understand that she was speaking to someone else. maybe having added some red on that last panel to show it was blood would have been nice too! proud of you for coming back!!!
# 7
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 01:03 PM
reading it backwards I still didn't really get it all I'm afraid :c glad you got something in at least.
and that goes for both, cause these easily feel like the most incomplete of the round, and it'll be a tough vote cause of that. I really think it could have gone either way though. definitely hope the winner can squeeze out a lil more for round 2!
and that goes for both, cause these easily feel like the most incomplete of the round, and it'll be a tough vote cause of that. I really think it could have gone either way though. definitely hope the winner can squeeze out a lil more for round 2!
# 6
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 11:57 AM
In the mean time- Please open Felle's pages as if it were a manga! <----------------- THIS WAY
# 5
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 11:32 AM
PM or email Wei or Red to fix it
# 4
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 11:15 AM
Because this conflabbin new technology! *Shakes cane* You had to reorganize it when you uploaded it by clicking and dragging. I noticed this last minute.
# 3
Posted:
Sep 8 2014, 10:53 AM
wait why is mines backwards
# 2
Posted:
Sep 1 2014, 02:02 PM
THAT'S IT I'M UNRETIRING!!!! ( best of luck Lune<3 )
# 1
Posted:
Sep 1 2014, 07:52 AM
Holy shit, what an awesome pairing. Not just cuz you two are awesome artists but these characters make a perfect battle.
Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Sep 14th, 2014
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33
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Winner:
luniara
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