the muddy colors complaint is interesting though, since these colors are literally just absolute ref colors + a very slight multiply layer to unify them. i think the problem is just i shaded too weakly?
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I'd say yeah push your lights and shadows some more and don't be afraid to vary your brush between hard and soft edges for shading. A good way to check your values is to put a black layer on top of your page and set it to "Color" blend mode to check if the values read right.
Here is an example using your page. Notice how everything is blending into mostly midtone territory.
Hope that helps!
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ASTRO- I really hope you reform void city and Naenae’s environments into this nightmare fantasy style going forward. The look is so new and fresh it had me pouring over the pages going ‘oooh’. Those hand trees are my fav.
I think if I had a nitpick it’d be to make the limits and functions of naenae’s psychic ability a bit clearer. Because as it stands she touched someone in order to take hold of them, but then the rest of the train simply get overtaken just because. Does she need to touch someone in order for the control to manifest? Did the affected party walking towards others ‘spread’ the psychic control? If nothing else, making this clearer would help future opponents.