Speed Resurrection Tournament 2007: Round 1 / Toby vs. Ji Kei

Speed Resurrection Tournament 2007: Round 1 — Toby vs. Ji Kei

by mickey

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by Mamoru

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Jade
Artist
19 comments
# 40   Posted: Jun 10 2007, 07:12 PM
whoever is trying to pass off the boobage and porn as satire needs to go to a dictionary and look up what \"satire\" means because i don\'t see any irony or sarcasm in the whole comic, just a ton of nipples and shit.

that being said, i like mickey\'s comic better.

Mikako chan
9 comments
# 39   Posted: Jun 4 2007, 06:26 PM
Ji comes back with a vengance...and bigger boobs xD;;

anyways, it was a good and entertaining fight, Made my day. I\'m sad that I couldn\'t vote ;__;

rabbitrabbit
Artist
334 comments
# 38   Posted: Jun 3 2007, 07:32 PM
Mickey: Y\'know, I don\'t really get a kick out of seeing a girl roll around in her own urine.  Maybe that\'s just me.  The art was cute, but let\'s face it: despite it being a \"style thing,\" it just isn\'t up to par with Mamoru\'s.  

Mamoru: It was really surprising to see you go in the direction of random humor.  I kinda like it.  It\'s not especially deep, though.  I feel like you might have to bring up the narration a little if you want to survive the tournament.  Overall though, my vote goes to you.  

Mase
Artist
81 comments
# 37   Posted: Jun 3 2007, 04:14 PM
I enjoyed both. I gave Mamoru the slight edge, though.

Majikura
Artist
469 comments
# 36   Posted: Jun 3 2007, 12:11 PM
you know. I\'m a big fan of Mickey\'s wordplay, and it being replaced with silly drawings of potty humor... I\'m disappointed greatly.

Pakun
8 comments
# 35   Posted: Jun 2 2007, 09:45 PM
Mickey\'s comic was REALLY funny. I laughed...alot. haha, and the random piss joke was what really got me XD But it didn\'t look like much effort was put into it (unless it was supposed to be that way) and Mamoru\'s comic was so nicely drawn

Mamoru\'s comic was...well, hot XD it\'s suprised me~ and it was entertaining. All in all, her\'s was better in all three catergories

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 34   Posted: May 31 2007, 07:26 PM
Dur, disregard the backgrounds comment. They were there, it was the large amount of whitespace that bugged me.

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 33   Posted: May 31 2007, 07:24 PM
I voted for Mickey. I could give a shit less about the story, it was just plain funny. Then again, most humor isn\'t deep. The most important thing in comedy is consistency of character, then you can worry about plot (if at all). Art was rushed, yeah, but I enjoyed the comic more.

Mamoru won by quite a bit in quality, even if the lack of backgrounds bugged me. I got that it was satire but it was handled poorly. So overdone that the satire angle was almost lost.

That and it saddens me that some people aren\'t gonna see it as satire, and will enjoy the hell out of it. Though that\'s not a mark against Mamoru.

Fionn
2 comments
# 32   Posted: May 30 2007, 11:27 PM
Ooooh....this is REALLY hard.

But in the end, I had to give it to Mamoru. :D There was actually fighting going on, although I had to continually look over my shoulder to make sure my seven year old cousin wouldn\'t peek, lol.

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 31   Posted: May 30 2007, 10:22 PM
Relax James. All I\'m saying is that if you\'re going to say a comic\'s story is great, then say why it\'s great.  Don\'t just be like \"I liked your comic the story was good, I\'m voting for you\"  - actually get in there and say why it was good.  You know?

James
Artist
90 comments
# 30   Posted: May 30 2007, 10:13 PM
When you post three times making condescending remarks about peoples opinions it DOES, you dumbshit!

A lot of people liked Mickeys entry, story and all... it doesn\'t have to be full of intrigue and deep socio-economic plots for people to get a kick out of it.  You may not have liked it, but others did for valid reasons which they explained. LET IT GO.

That goes for you too Sheldon, you little oil spreading whore!!

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 29   Posted: May 30 2007, 09:58 PM
Ok then  - if the story was so awesome, what makes it so awesome?
Are you sure you didn\'t mean it was awesomely funny?  Because it was funny.  But there\'s no real story here.  
A dead guys wakes up next to a dinosaur, a girl shows up ~ falls in her own pee and a dinosaur eats her head.  Yeah it\'s funny.  But that\'s not exactly an amazing story, so I really don\'t know where you\'re pulling this praise about the story from.    And since when does having a different opinion = starting a fight?

James
Artist
90 comments
# 28   Posted: May 30 2007, 08:55 PM
I thought it was about time for Pong to try to start a fight over nothing. Stop fueling shit dude, it got old a year ago.

I voted for Mickey cus quite frankly she handled Mams character in suitable Mickey fashion. I love Mickey comics, and this was a good Mickey comic, so I have no Mickey complaints. Mickey.

I\'m really not trying to be a dick to you Mams, cus I\'ve got enormous respect for you and your insatiable thirst for artistic growth, but Ji was never your best character and is totally kinda BAD... and Mickey handled her in a way that\'s not only funny to me, but really one of the ONLY way to do it that isn\'t riddled in cliches.  It\'s great to see how much your newer work has improved (and i\'m not saying these pages are drawn bad, I gave you high marks in quality), but this fight felt like you had very little to work with so you fell back on cameos and camel toes. Satire or not, it didn\'t convey the humor very well and just, as somebody said above, felt like a cheesy hentai comic.

Craqued
Artist
202 comments
# 27   Posted: May 30 2007, 08:45 PM
To me Mickeys story was unconventionally charming, the style was fun and it was just plain fun to read.

Mamo\'s was...not surprising and kind of just...boring. Seen it all before. The coloring and art is alright but it wasn\'t exciting. Just kind of same ol\' same ol\'.

Rock on Micks.

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 26   Posted: May 30 2007, 07:44 PM
Yes, the absolutely brilliant story of a girl rolling around in her own urine.
Shakespeare himself couldn\'t have crafted a more clever storyline.  Bravo.

Marley
Artist
259 comments
# 25   Posted: May 30 2007, 12:28 PM
mickey I also love your comics! The art on it does look rushed, but the construction and overall story makes up for it.

mamoru - Art is pretty solid on this, but thats all I can give you for this. Your comic really really heavily depended on cameos and exploitation to get you through . Im sorry and I think you\'re a good artist, but I really didn\'t get much out of this.  YOU CAN DO BETTER!!!!

I gave it to mickey for an overall better comic

mr. robot
Artist
133 comments
# 24   Posted: May 30 2007, 11:43 AM
mickey I adore your comics.

Larathen
Artist
182 comments
# 23   Posted: May 29 2007, 08:54 PM
.......




Im speachless..

Neoriceisgood
Artist
74 comments
# 22   Posted: May 29 2007, 04:12 PM
Just after being left speechless by Mamoru\'s performance it was topped by Toby\'s comic being even. . . more out there.


How is it possible that both of you ended up with such. . I

I gotta sleep over this.

Hero Karma
51 comments
# 21   Posted: May 29 2007, 11:15 AM
Mikey\'s was funny was blatanly rushed and certainly lower quality than your old works.  Mamaoru had a lot more effort, quality(You know I love those first pages you do), and entertainment.  Funniest stuff I\'ve seen in a long time, but I could live without the flagrant fan service.  

My vote goes to Mamaru on this one.  And remember kiddies, less camel toe and more cow bell

Aim
29 comments
# 20   Posted: May 29 2007, 09:46 AM
Mickey\'s was good, yes, but his art quality and story-telling was below his old standard, I thought. Not to mention that in his old comics Toby owned through rocking his opponent by being Toby, where as in this one some dragon just comes up and kills his opponent without him having to do much of anything.

Whatever, I guess maybe it\'s a matter of taste. Maybe my eye for this sort of thing sucks. Maybe I just like boobs. I don\'t know. XD

Shintsu
Artist
15 comments
# 19   Posted: May 29 2007, 07:29 AM
Maybe, but I thought I was reading a fucking henti manga.

Nice, consistent style and art and wonderful storytelling in Micky\'s.  Way to go. :)

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 18   Posted: May 28 2007, 10:59 PM
He did it as satire Sheldon.

sheldon
Artist
141 comments
# 17   Posted: May 28 2007, 09:35 PM
i had to re register just now so i cant vote. but if i was it\'d be going to mickey.

mickey: flow (although completely random) was fucking beautiful. and even though your art was obviously rushed, you made it work FOR you. that pissing page killed me. and i know all your future rounds will follow along a same storyline.

mamouru: i dont really know how to crit your work, but i can say it was a chore to read. the nudity could have been done without being so explicit, and i feel your work lost all integrity by having a fanservice in every third panel.

theres a way you CAN do nudity/sex in comics, and theres a way you DONT do nudity/sex in comics. you did it the way you DONT do it.


i guess (and without intention of starting a riot) you guys wouldn\'t know a good comic is it bit you in the arse.

Chair
34 comments
# 16   Posted: May 28 2007, 08:52 PM
Mickey, i laughed so fucking loud everyone in the vicinity was like WHAT IS GOING ON???

i generally like this style of comics, but mamoru\'s comic felt like a spot more effort artwise. and nice coloring on the one page too mamoru. storywise i don\'t know what to go with.

goddamn this is a tough vote.

Weepy
18 comments
# 15   Posted: May 28 2007, 08:51 PM
Give me a sex change and bang me, both of you.

King_Pong
Artist
601 comments
# 14   Posted: May 28 2007, 08:46 PM
Mickey, I think you could have worked some fart jokes into yours.  It\'s just lacking in immaturity I think.  Only a bit though.  Maybe your instinct for subtlety let you know to play it down a bit.

Mamoru, you drew boobs and stuff.

This is a tough choice.

Aim
29 comments
# 13   Posted: May 28 2007, 08:41 PM
I liked both, but in the end, I think I\'m giving it to Momaru. They were both impressive, but honestly, it doesn\'t seem like there\'s that much progression from your old comics, mickey. I mean, it\'s good, but Momaru really seems to have pulled out all of the stops on this one. The random fanservice was pretty fun, and the depiction of purgatory was pretty awesome, what with Bad Apple riding on Polar Pal, stepping in Gum and what not. BURRITO IN HELL. >: D

But don\'t get me wrong. Yours was excellent too, as usual, Mickey.

justarhymes
Artist
654 comments
# 12   Posted: May 28 2007, 08:29 PM
mickey, that was great.

mam, yours was slightly less great, but still really enjoyable.

Inferno
40 comments
# 11   Posted: May 28 2007, 08:07 PM
freakinn funni mamoru
omfg tha ending was great
mickey urs was amaxing but in the end i gave it to mamoru

jho
Artist
485 comments
# 10   Posted: May 28 2007, 07:41 PM
mickey you prolly did the whole entry in like 2 hours, but FUCK IF IT DIDN\'T MAKE ME LAUGH, I FUCKING HATE YOU SO MUCH BY HATE I MEAN LOVE AND BY LOVE I MEAN I love you ... ok ok

mamoru: you put time into this and it shows, it\'s much more consistent than your prev battles? and there\'s a lot of referencing going on! I was surprised to see the red riding hood haha and toby looks prettty sleeeek

voted, voted, voted ...  gahhh

Jackster
Artist
304 comments
# 9   Posted: May 28 2007, 07:20 PM
Mickey, you are now my new favorite!

AhalfAcupAtea
Artist
38 comments
# 8   Posted: May 25 2007, 09:30 AM
GO TOBY!!!

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 7   Posted: May 24 2007, 02:40 PM
Toby died on my birthday . .  ..

Graphyte Ronin
Artist
113 comments
# 6   Posted: May 21 2007, 10:47 AM
Fight for your lives guys!!

Go for the gold kommerade!

Cracking Skulls
Artist
354 comments
# 5   Posted: May 21 2007, 10:14 AM
Whoo! Good luck Mamoru!

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 4   Posted: May 21 2007, 09:03 AM
Gooooo Mamoru!

jho
Artist
485 comments
# 3   Posted: May 21 2007, 03:42 AM
SORRY MAM, BUT TOBY IS MY FAVE


MICKEY MICKEY MICKEY

sixtem
Artist
395 comments
# 2   Posted: May 20 2007, 10:42 PM
Sorry Mamoru, I don\'t even think butt-floss can save you. D:

Actually I think Ji Kei\'d have had a longer run if Fuu hadn\'t cut it short.

Qyzex
Artist
670 comments
# 1   Posted: May 20 2007, 09:43 PM
hells yeah!

GO TOBY!

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Speed Resurrection Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jun 3rd, 2007
Votes Cast: 107
Page Views: 2594
Winner: Mamoru
 

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