Rehn: You did fantastic for your first one weeker. It kills me how good you are with stories and script. The transition between her ptsd and coming too in Amelias office was fantastic. This works as a wonderful intro for MF into void! Your anatomy and the stiffness is still a work in progress but you improving in leaps and bounds
Diz: I do enjoy your style I just wish I got to see some color in this one or even some flat blacks. It can be tough to come up with a script around a character that doesn't have and intro or a comic yet (I should know I do it to people all the time). I liked Mf showcasiing her combat skills to try and get the job, not certain what kind of job she was going for. Security? Guard? Babysitter? Still congrats on finishing your round.
Both of you did a fantastic job!
MF 4694 vs. Amelia Fey
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Nov 15 2021, 11:53 AM
# 6
Posted:
Nov 15 2021, 10:45 AM
nice work you guys, you're both showing a lot of improvement
# 5
Posted:
Nov 14 2021, 11:13 PM
You both managed a lot for a one weeker! But both lacked backgrounds in a pretty noticeable way. Diz, yours had too much empty space, and rehn your was the opposite, it felt cramped and claustrophobic. But! I know comics are hard im just happy you both turned in something complete! Diz, i liked your inks! Rehn, the colours and textures of the first two pages were excellent for setting up a battlefield! (Though for the rest, i think the foreground colours and background colours were a little too close).
Great job dudes!
Great job dudes!
# 4
Posted:
Nov 11 2021, 07:11 AM
Thanks! The only thing I’m a little critical with on mine is the length. Wish I had done a little more.
# 3
Posted:
Nov 11 2021, 05:36 AM
Oohh interesting direction, Diz! Working right off the bat to give MF a new purpose, I like it! Real solid line work on your end also, and I liked the way the long scrolling pages flowed! Super easy to keep track of what was going on!
# 2
Posted:
Nov 10 2021, 03:10 PM
Wow these two entries were tight. Diz you have some super clean line work there. And Rehn. I really like the panel placement along with the colors. You two keep it up!!! I would like to see more from the both of ya
# 1
Posted:
Nov 10 2021, 10:22 AM
Steal, your side of this is composed super nicely, and I like that you showed the caring side of Amelia in yours. Very cool!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Nov 17th, 2021
Votes Cast:
19
Page Views:
936
Winner:
StealRehn
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You have an intriguing character, great work!
Invaderdiz- What stands out about your work is your clean lines which help guide the reader through the shapes and the pages. You have an efficient style and I think that really helps you in these 1 weekers. Great work!
Very fun reads!