I enjoy the style you use, and the fluid way the characters move. Fun comic, and a great one for the 24Hr time limit!

hey this is actually pretty good! kudos

WOW Gemma, awesome work here. I loved your inks and characters, and that color at the beginning/end was sweet too. amazing job!!

very nicely done! it reads incredibly well, with only that one panel being noticably lower quality than the rest. and it's funny to boot! strong work, gemma!

I just got back from an all nighter 24 hour comic day event X’D we had a theme, being “the machine of death”

pretty much a machine of any shape or size tells people who they will die. we had to pull out a death from a hat ( I got "Versus a Beast") to base our comic off of and draw a 24 page comic in 24 hours! I havent done anything longer that maybe 8 pages so this was a reeeal challenge. My knuckles hurt SO MUCH by the end of it ;_; i made it with 3 hours to spare till the finish time, But i just couldnt do anymore, I was shattered X’D

So here is my first attempt at the 24 hour 24 page comic challenge! this has been unedited and not touched since i finished it. But I may return to it and make a nice cleaner version the middle pages are a bit sloppy cos i worked from the beggining and end inwards so the beggining and end had nice inks at least

This was a real surprise to me, so I'm glad you came out for 24-hour comic day, too! Your comic is wildly well-done for a 24 hour comic day. It was a pretty solid story in the comic and your back-story as to the why is interesting regarding it too.