VCV: Ingress / Raven
Critiques & Comments
# 15
Posted:
Feb 17 2022, 06:41 AM
Damn, this is such a beautiful style! Incredible work!
# 14
Posted:
Feb 16 2022, 09:48 AM
I forgot to comment while this was in voting ><;; BUT THIS CAME OUT AMAZING! I love this new style youve been working with and I hope its faster so we can see more art from you! The broad strokes are so SEXY in your style~ and i love the reds and greens at the end. Gorgeous work!!!
# 13
Posted:
Feb 16 2022, 07:06 AM
Thank you so much to all of you! I am very glad this experimentation is well-received. I'll try to make more comics with this style (and hope to improve as I go) as I also enjoyed the process very much. <3
# 12
Posted:
Feb 15 2022, 10:56 PM
This is my first time seeing a fully comic in this painterly style and it looks amazing.
# 11
Posted:
Feb 14 2022, 09:38 PM
Your rendering is on point as always, and I'm glad that you've found a style that you can get done within a week! Hope to see you apply this workflow to your future stories.
# 10
Posted:
Feb 14 2022, 12:06 PM
You've been kicking ass with this gorgeous painterly style!
# 9
Posted:
Feb 10 2022, 06:25 PM
Rivana, this is SO lovely~! You should teach a lecture on how you make your art look so traditional ! very moody , as well
feels like a magazine add for a new book coming out next fall?
feels like a magazine add for a new book coming out next fall?
# 8
Posted:
Feb 10 2022, 05:18 PM
I enjoyed this style exploration! Looking forward to what happens next.
# 7
Posted:
Feb 9 2022, 12:30 PM
Also LOOK OUT RAVEN! BEHIND YOU! 😱
# 6
Posted:
Feb 9 2022, 12:29 PM
This new style works so well for you! I love how you took advantage of it to create such beautiful borderless panels that are clearly delineated by color and visual hierarchy despite blending into each other. Just 😩👌 excellent work!
# 5
Posted:
Feb 8 2022, 08:55 PM
Love that the thumbnail is a doorway
# 4
Posted:
Feb 8 2022, 07:14 PM
Your hard work and dedication shows Riv! This looks AWESOME!
# 3
Posted:
Feb 8 2022, 03:43 PM
AHHH This was SO beautiful riv!
# 2
Posted:
Feb 8 2022, 03:41 PM
RIV IM GONNA EXPLODE
# 1
Posted:
Jan 31 2022, 11:39 AM
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Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Feb 15th, 2022
Votes Cast:
22
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Story-wise, I do like this introspective tone, but I think for me it's getting a little repetitive? like, Raven's story has had a lot of these "I'm a monster, I don't deserve people caring about me, I only bring pain to those around me" moments, which by themselves I don't have a problem with, but I'd like to see something new! It feels like there's been a lot of setup but no payoff yet? But hey! Hopefully this will lead to a progression in her story, I'm interested in seeing what comes of this cliffhanger *eyes emoji*