Damn! That is quite intimidating. Sweet details and action!
Sometimes the dialogue is a lil overwhelming when their mushed together, but damn again awesome comic.
If i don't make it in this tourney, i'll be rooting for you. (and 4 others)

Keep up the goods.

Sheldon, - Whatever happened, i understand.
I'm sure it would've been nuts! Was nice to see you in action again still.

TODK I love you style so much with or without color, it still blows my mind.. Your line work was amazing to me and great way to tie the end of the J.J. battle with this one. Excellent work.

Thanks guys!

Sheldon: You bastard, how dare you prioritize work over BATTLE COMIX. You owe me a rematch in the future.
Pyras: Thanks very much, haha, I'll make sure to turn it up to 11 next time.
Kevin: Cheers, I cracked out most of this comic about 5 days before the deadline, so I didn't have time to tone or color which usually can compensate for how weak my lines tend to get on these short deadlines. I'll definitely use it as an opportunity to shape them up.
Pon: Haha thanks man, I don't think I'm quite on the same beast mode level that Sheldon is but I'm trying.

For a second there I thoughtthat first page was Sheldon's for sure. But I was wrong
Todk amazing illusion. By far one of my favorite so far. Keep on trucking.

Sheldon: You make me a sad panda.

TODK: Well done, sir.  Action, comedy, drama, and you continued both your own and Sheldon's story.  My only crit is the linework is real loose and kinda sloppy.  The JJ match looked much cleaner and tighter than this, so I docked you some Quality points.  Still, very entertaining.

Tom, you're amazing. And I really can't tell you how SORRY I am. Absolutely shit by me, brother. All I can say is "real work" (using the term in the loosest fashion possible) demanded my full attention. I owe you one chief.

In all honesty, I don't think i could have beaten you if i tried haha. You're a lean mean machine of the comics making variety my friend.

Hands down: Pandora and her comics = one of the best things about Void.

10.10.10

I can't think of better action drawn and written in the tournament so far.

If I had to have something that would improve it to an 11, it would be a larger variety of line widths to show depth of objects and environments, because one can easily get lost in the sea of details if they're not paying attention.

Haha thanks for pointing that out, Wolcik, I originally had Charlie actually catching one of the missiles the police cruiser fired in his mouth, and spitting it back out. I guess along the way I overlooked that little plot hole when I changed it. CURSES.

I had to scan about half of this on another person's scanner, all but one or two pages was actually done about 4 days early since I had to ditch my apartment for Oregon to visit friends, so I wasn't able to tone this one ;_;

Thanks for the feedback though!

Cheers

TODK - Amazing story, and especially since you grasphed Charlie's from last round really great. When Pandora turned into defensive mode things got a little complicated for me - her emotional status changed somehow in the way she moved and her expressions - was it because of the program, the action she was doing or sudden change of personality?
Ending was ridiculous - very nice and compleing, but leaving us with the same brain scratching idea that all plot-twists when your best friend that help you tear down half the evil organisation turns out to be the bad guy and owner of it that will now try to kill you, and not 500 times before when he saved protogonist's ass - if they could get out of that situation so easely why postpone it? Then again it's Charlie and he could be restoring it as a final solution thing.

Sheldon: I was expecting at least 2 doodled pages, cause it would justify it all - just seeing you put some pro panel layouts even without any actual story.

DK: That was a REALLY fun read. So enjoyably silly and action-packed! Really don't have much to say in terms of crits other than it got a bit messy at times. Lots and lots of little details and no line widths or colors to separate them can turn kinda mucky, but it didn't take away from the story flow. Excellent, sir. <3

Sheldon: Bummer, bro.

Tom, I already told you how fucking badass yours was. Just needs some cleaning up a tad.

Sheldon... well... I kinda expected it.

That sad face must mean you won't marry me.

):

Great work again!

TODK, you rock. I love you, MARRY ME.

I was pretty disappointed to see nothing from Sheldon though too.

Oh man...
I came >__>

!!!!!!!!

UPLOADED

YEAAAAAAAAAAH BROTHERRR

This may be the greatest battle ever...or not?

Hnnnnnngh my nutbladder --

I'm ready to have my mind blown!!!!........ thank you in advance ~.~)

My brain cannot contain the levels of awesome being generated.

Shit's gonna get real.

Beautiful~

TODK GOT THE BATTLE I WANTED haha.

Put on a good show dudes!

TODK is battling against his future self o:

fuh-huuuh-uck!

AVENGE MEEEEEEE ROBOCHIX 4 LYFE

this is
gonna be
sick

Oh my goodness oh my goodness

I expect awesome and nothing less than that.

FUCKING. YES.

Christmas came early!

Good luck you two!

fuck.

COMIX OVERDRIVE MODE. ENGAGE.

BERSERKER MODE ACTIVATE

Holy shit.

Crash of the Titans, or what?

Make your parents proud XD

Oh Charlie's gonna be grossing out.