Haha... Wow!
I kinda like this intro, and I see pros AND cons to it, compared to what my stuff looks like now.

Getting in was A TON OF WORK! I submitted about 8 or 9 times, pretty much EVERY TIME doing a completely new intro comic and design sheet AND new win an lose poses! I really liked a couple of OTHER intro comics I did for Chia-Hui better (WAY better), specifically one I did with a Sharpie for the lineart and copic markers for color.

I finally got so SICK of doing all new stuff over and over and over again, that even though I had ALREADY submitted to the main site when I posted the stuff in the incubator, I used a pic I had traced as a study (when Zsa mentioned Chia-Hui looked like a guy from Vagabond) but HADN'T SUBMITTED, as an example of a win pose since it was something I had around... To this DAY Zsa gives me crap about it, and mentions it EVERY TIME he gets!!
I got in days later.

At that point, I had drawn 16 all new pages of original comic sequentials, 8 different design sheets, and 8 brand new and different win poses... with 8 new lose poses! 16 in total... this, imo, NOT being the best one.
... Oh well. Haha.
Pity party, Pity party, Pity party.