I... think my eyes bled a little looking at this.
Dawg: Your comic had a very indy-comic feel to it, but not enough that it was a seamless, entertaining story. It was more haphazard. And the inconsistent art threw me off as well =/ Develop the storytelling and some regularity in your art, and you\'re on your way!
Graz: I\'ve read the above comments and saw that you were rushed for time - but in cases like that, you\'ve gotta work on your speed-drawing skills. This, as you know, could\'ve been aeons better. Ah well.
Better luck to both of you next time!
Jingles vs. Cy-Boar
Critiques & Comments
# 20
Posted:
Mar 12 2007, 07:00 AM
# 19
Posted:
Mar 11 2007, 07:13 PM
Both of these were fun!
Dawgie dawg = super jingles ayumi party time!! I like the way you ended it a whole lot. It all came together very nicely. My cookies off to you my friend! Someday we will draw together and it will be the most awesome time ever
CYBOAR!!!= the entry looks like you dropped it in last minute, but it still has a solid little storyline, and the art is coherent. Hope you have more time to work on your next battle!
Dawgie dawg = super jingles ayumi party time!! I like the way you ended it a whole lot. It all came together very nicely. My cookies off to you my friend! Someday we will draw together and it will be the most awesome time ever
CYBOAR!!!= the entry looks like you dropped it in last minute, but it still has a solid little storyline, and the art is coherent. Hope you have more time to work on your next battle!
# 18
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 08:49 PM
Mr. Jingles wins my vote because of the superior artwork, but I really enjoyed both stories.
Mr. Graz, I look forward to seeing what you can do with a little more time to work.
Mr. Graz, I look forward to seeing what you can do with a little more time to work.
# 17
Posted:
Mar 9 2007, 07:55 PM
Sorry graz, didn\'t mean to be that negitive. Sucks the mustache battle didn\'t go up, I heard that neither of your opponent\'s work was up to par with there current stuff. I am looking forward towards your next battle however.
And Werd dawg, I did see some character development with that mini story you had in your comic, you defenetly need to battle somebody really quick like.
And Werd dawg, I did see some character development with that mini story you had in your comic, you defenetly need to battle somebody really quick like.
# 16
Posted:
Mar 8 2007, 12:38 PM
Glad you liked it, Graz. Yours was good too. It made me el oh el.
And Phill, don\'t worry... more story will come in time.
And Phill, don\'t worry... more story will come in time.
# 15
Posted:
Mar 8 2007, 11:48 AM
Phillip C: Thanks for the comments, even if they were negative. I was waiting to draw this until I saw the response to the moustace battle that I\'d previously drawn w GVSR & Merk, but that battle was never posted! So I got no response, and ran severly low on time...
Dawgmastas: GREAT stuff! Great renditions of Cy-boar, and you even worked Squirrel into there!
(I liked your interesting color pallette and the bizarre work out scene. I\'m going to do you some additional fan art as thanks...)
Dawgmastas: GREAT stuff! Great renditions of Cy-boar, and you even worked Squirrel into there!
(I liked your interesting color pallette and the bizarre work out scene. I\'m going to do you some additional fan art as thanks...)
# 14
Posted:
Mar 8 2007, 09:55 AM
my vote goes to dagmastas. Man, jingles is so funny, and I thought the quality was really great too. haha the lets get pysical part KILLED me!
# 13
Posted:
Mar 8 2007, 06:38 AM
dawg you scare me sometimes.
In a good funkadelic way.
In a good funkadelic way.
# 12
Posted:
Mar 7 2007, 06:02 PM
Pretty nice battle.
Dawg: Quality wise you seem to be doing a bit more with characters and background so high marks there defenetly. Entertainment you defenetly have the win there (though... I could live without the RedBlood Cameo, it seemed unessisary to me honestly). I honestly was hopeful for more serious storyline after your merk fight dawg, but still this was a good read nonetheless.
Graz73: Dude... dissapointing, very dissapointing. Especially after guys like James and Marley were shouting out \"CY-BOAR!! HE RULES!\" in the forums and hyping you up. I was expecting to be blown away man, not 3 pages of some fight and quickly done pencils that can be easily done within a day (even I can do that). Sorry man, I can\'t really give you anything above a C, your entertainment scores however were a bit high because you actually had something.
What else can I say, congrats on the win Dawg. Better luck next time Graz.
Dawg: Quality wise you seem to be doing a bit more with characters and background so high marks there defenetly. Entertainment you defenetly have the win there (though... I could live without the RedBlood Cameo, it seemed unessisary to me honestly). I honestly was hopeful for more serious storyline after your merk fight dawg, but still this was a good read nonetheless.
Graz73: Dude... dissapointing, very dissapointing. Especially after guys like James and Marley were shouting out \"CY-BOAR!! HE RULES!\" in the forums and hyping you up. I was expecting to be blown away man, not 3 pages of some fight and quickly done pencils that can be easily done within a day (even I can do that). Sorry man, I can\'t really give you anything above a C, your entertainment scores however were a bit high because you actually had something.
What else can I say, congrats on the win Dawg. Better luck next time Graz.
# 11
Posted:
Mar 7 2007, 07:37 AM
technical problems....short delay
# 10
Posted:
Mar 6 2007, 05:32 AM
mine were emailed to Toast last night. If there were anythings else I was supposed to do, lemme know...
# 9
Posted:
Mar 5 2007, 09:05 PM
Well, I\'m uploaded.
# 8
Posted:
Mar 5 2007, 02:31 PM
Mothafuckin CYBOAR
# 7
Posted:
Mar 1 2007, 03:10 PM
awssooommeee
# 6
Posted:
Feb 6 2007, 12:00 AM
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# 5
Posted:
Feb 5 2007, 07:11 PM
I look forward to this.
# 4
Posted:
Feb 5 2007, 06:57 PM
FURRY FIGHT FURRY FIGHT FURRY FIGHT
# 3
Posted:
Feb 5 2007, 03:52 PM
RAGING HARDON!
# 2
Posted:
Feb 5 2007, 03:46 PM
yeah, if this aint the sexiest thing EVER
# 1
Posted:
Feb 5 2007, 03:46 PM
HOT!
Trophy Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Mar 14th, 2007
Votes Cast:
55
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1635
Winner:
justarhymes
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That was some funny shit when they started dancing and stuff. Hilarious.
I liked it when Cyboar told the \"squirrel\" to get lost and in response \"i\'m a cat goddamit!\"
I could follow the story very well, cept on the first page the text bubbles in the first three panels kinda confused me as to what to read first. Good job nonetheless.
Graz:
Your stuff looks rushed, but it was visually good enough to tell a story
supported by the dialogue. However, that font is killing me!
I liked how you paced Jingles\' plan of robbing the bank that ended in a surprise fist in the face. Talk about setting up a punchline.
TIme isn\'t always on our side but at least you submitted.
Upto the next fight guys!