I like this idea of a "new season" intro comic collection. I'm debating whether or not I want at least one or two more pages for each character though, or maybe more of a theme other than "here's where we're at." Other than that, I think the setups are pretty good. This is a nice alternative to the catch-up pages that list all the characters with a blurb about what they've been up to.
I like your halftone style, though sometimes I feel that the dots are a bit too big. If you haven't tested it out already I'd be interested in seeing your style with a finer halftone. My only other comment is with the Smiles panel on page 1. I think its the only time you use that shading method and I feel that you could have just thrown a halftone over it and it would have done the job.
Other than that I like how consistent your style is and how polished your line work is. I'm excited to see where each story goes from here
Jump Start / Shaw, Craven, Mayor Miranda Munroe, and La Estrellita Demonica
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Jun 17 2021, 08:51 AM
# 3
Posted:
Jun 15 2021, 08:55 AM
It's nice to see what these characters are up to. Love the little references on how we can get ourselves up to speed at the bottom of each page. Those are really helpful. However, I came here expecting that there will be a connection between their stories somewhat because it is presented as one BB ^^"
Either way, looking forward to see where they go from here!
Either way, looking forward to see where they go from here!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 14 2021, 11:16 AM
So close to your 50th comic!
I'm excited to see these characters stories unfold! I need more Shaw being bara!
I'm excited to see these characters stories unfold! I need more Shaw being bara!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 10 2021, 12:36 PM
These scenes are pretty neat! Line work still as good as ever and the tones are pretty solid (in my opinion). I feel like this is a good catch up comic for those who haven't been reading your comics to catch up and even find out what happened as to help put eyes on your previous works on your future works. Great Job and Keep at it my dude!
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jun 17th, 2021
Votes Cast:
11
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1078
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