Bobo:
Eeeee thank you so much!! <33

Red:
Thanks

Alright. Didn't get as much work done as I had planned - it was a lot busier at work this past week. However, I did get Page 1 colored!



Oh, and since there weren't a lot of people who were into Aurora's purple dreads, I made them more reddish-brown. Better? I'll update her ref sheet laters~

As Red has said, you should definitely pick who YOU want to be making comics for more, but, since you asked for opinions, Myyynnnnnxxx!!

I think the fact that you haven't had a lot of experience with drawing larger body types gives you the perfect excuse to use her! You'll be drawing her lots and will have to learn how her body looks in various poses/angles/spaces etc.! Plus everyone on here is awesome and gives fantastic feedback

Loving your concepts though. I look forward to seeing some pages

Welp. I wanted to experiment if lining traditionally would be faster than lining digitally. Technically, I'm a teensy bit faster, but the amount of time I spent editing the scans probably plus inking the pages would have amounted to digitally inking pages.

However, I learned some things, and though I am not looking forward to scanning the last two pages of my intro, I'm still excited to be going through with this!

So have pages 1 and 4 inked. Goin' out of order cuz I'm a rebel.

P1


P4

JoeNeary:
Oh gosh that sounds awesome! Remmy's gonna have to try to make him some new friends

Thanks so much for the feedback!  Yeah, better borders will definitely be added, promise!

You pretty much got most of it spot on, some things will be made more clear once I ink them. However you pretty much confirmed that pg2 is probably going to be a bit difficult to interpret even inked so I'll definitely have to try again.

Again thank you so much for the info! It's greatly appreciated!

Thank you so much, Bobo!

Is it because they're still too sketchy or things just don't make sense?

You guys I am sooo excited to be finally be doing this you have no idea. 83

Disclaimer:
I used to be the user Forever After a million years ago, so if Aurora sounds/look familiar, that's because she's the same character... except I'm actually doing something with her this time.

Onto stuff!






Name: Aurora
Age: 23
Sex: Female
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 180 lbs.
Sexual Orientation: Whoever is consenting
Race: Satyr

Weapons:
Horns
Thyrsus
Cape around arm acts as a light shield

About:
-incredibly charming
-passionate
-helpful
-friendly
-will literally sleep with anyone
-accepting wine/listening to her piccolo (or both) will pretty much guarantee sexy time


Name:Remus
Age: ??
Sex: Male
Height: 14' 5"
Weight: 13,000 lbs.
Race: Dragon

Weapons:
Tail

About:
-chirps, whistles, squawks like a bird
-very expressive
-adores grapes
-super loving
-only responds to Aurora if called "Remmy"

Bio:
Before Aurora and Remus crossed paths several years ago, Aurora was just as every other Satyr in Arcadia - drunk, violent, loud, dangerous and incredibly lustful. She would often engage in sacrificial rituals, death matches, thievery, and other ludicrous activities. After they met, however, Remus slowly began to morph her beliefs and outlook on life.

They began to travel to nearby villages and Remus convinced Aurora to "help" people rather than "hurt" people. She realized helping people wasn't so horrible after all and her hostility and drunkenness essentially vanished. Though her sexual prowess has yet to see change, she can lull her desires through acts of kindness.

Aurora and Remus have recently left Arcadia and do not intend to return anytime soon.

Notes:
-they're often hunted by maenads (crazy nymphs)
-Remus will keep Aurora in line by squawking at her/hitting her with his tail
-Aurora never strikes him back
-Remus only goes to sleep if Aurora plays him a lullaby
-Aurora will not take offered shelter if Remus won't fit/isn't invited
-Both their diets consist of bugs/fruits/veggies
-(more to come as I ponder about them!)

Intro Pages:









I know they're pretty rough, but I'd like to see if I could have some feedback on them... I wanted to make sure that panels made the story continue and that there wasn't anything unnecessary or if I needed to add anything to make things clearer.

Page 2 is making me angry, so I might just scrap that one and start all over.

I also had a couple other ideas in mind for intros (leaving Arcadia, "friendly" encounters etc.) but I feel as though this would without a doubt show the bond between them.



Again- I'm super excited for this and I can't wait to finish these intro pages and start battling sooon!! >]