Wow, guys, this was a really entertaining story. I can't wait to see the next part! Duredhel, your pencils looked great, but for some reason your font was very pixelated. I had an issue with mine when I didn't use bicubic sampling, perhaps that might help smooth it out in the future. And Mister Kent, I feel like a little bit more line variation in certain panels (top of page 11, for example) will make your art really pop. Both of you guys had a great script and snappy dialogue, and even though this is my first time reading your characters, I'm really intrigued to see more.

If he did the text in Photoshop it can be fixed by going up to the toolbar. Next to the font and font size, there's a dropdown menu. If it's on "None" the text will look like ass. "Strong" or "Smooth" usually looks pretty nice. But that's only if Dure's text was done in PS, for other programs I wouldn't know.

Just an immediate thing that comes to mind, Dure's text needs some antialiasing or something, it's very pixel-y and I find it distracting.

haha no worries, I just wanted to make sure there wasn't a bug.

this was cool and jus so u kno im holding my breath for the conclusion so get crackin

To Angie: Oooh Yeah I did them a bit at a time - that's probably why! Sorry - I didn't realize it would do that

It feels cathartic to see the story finally up here! Dure, your art is gorgeous as always. Thanks for collaboration!

Generic Diner is the place where I go every day to eat my generic lunch before my generic classes!
And god, that is some georgious art you make.
Good job guys, I'm eager to see that conclusion

I'm about to put this up but I have a question for Mister Kent. Are you uploading all your pages at one time or are you uploading a page at a time? Because I just got 23 messages saying you uploaded a comic at random intervals so I'm trying to figure out why I got 23 messages about you uploading haha

Good luuuuuuuuuuuuck!

Uploaded :O! Sucks I couldn't do colour, but I gotta go get on a plane now :O!

Good luck you two... Mr. Kent I'll see you on the 1st.

Make no mistake though, it'll still be spectacular
Dure + MK = AWESOMETOWN

*sigh* I have to rescan the original pages, as my files are lost
I'll have things pretty well tidy by tonight, though

Pins and Needles guys pin and needles.

good luvk u too i hope everything is well

Dure: ¿Es posible que podamos ver dinosaurios en su parque de dinosaurios?

PD: ¡¡¡Lucha fuerte macho!!!

Good luck you two!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It'll be worth it I am sure.

Still can't wait~!

No prob

Had to get an extension because I'm going back home to Peru earlier than I had anticipated >__>

Well now ain't this gonna be INTERESTING HMM?

Nice to see you back Dure! Good luck you two!

Hey, welcome back Durd. Hope to see something great from the both of you.

Bitchin' XD Two long complex stories comin' up XD