Njhinesjr -
That was fukking incredible line art there. You pin the action and angles down in a way most people should look upto. Your anatomy and detail work really caught my attention, made me wanna re-read and wish there were more pages. Your stuff would really come to life with colour, then again i like BW stuff weven more. I noticed some smudges in your work you could get rid of in photoshop (ctrl+L) But hey..doesn\'t bother me too much.
I dig how you portrayed Kappa\'s movement. From the two step dance, to the flipping around.
In my last fight you left a comment that you and i should dance on a moonlit evening.
Trust me...we\'ll get there someday. On my hitlist you go dammit!
Rookie-
As former king of defaulting i tell you..i understand...whatever it was. Shit happened.
I really miss your stuff though. It\'s been a while. I still hope we can do that fight we never finished/cancelled.
Nameless vs. Kappa
Critiques & Comments
# 23
Posted:
Apr 20 2007, 02:48 PM
# 22
Posted:
Apr 20 2007, 09:44 AM
PEOPLE Nameless is drawin great, the comic was SO COOL, damn it!
# 21
Posted:
Apr 19 2007, 05:23 PM
Njhinesjr, your pencils are beautiful, but I thought the comic was rather boring. Next time, try to come up with a storyline that we wouldn\'t expect and your creativity and entertainment scores should be higher... you are so freakishly talented that there is no reason that nameless shouldn\'t be an A ranked fighter! Your art blew me away though, man.
# 20
Posted:
Apr 19 2007, 11:26 AM
Sweet, SWEET pencils, Njh. Most of the things you could work on have already been mentioned, speech bubbles, uping the contrast, etc. Dialogue and story line so far is your bigest crutch, but still, very, VERY nice battle.
Rookie- (;_; Was really looking forward to your side....
Rookie- (;_; Was really looking forward to your side....
# 19
Posted:
Apr 18 2007, 08:09 PM
amazin art nameless
# 18
Posted:
Apr 18 2007, 05:48 PM
Whoa Nij, artistically speaking, Nameless is an AAA fighter. Love the look of the battle, the movement, the panneling. On the artistic side, the ONE thing I can say is maybe a bit more contrast would\'ve been good, you know? Darker darks & lighter lights?
Now where it kinda falls appart is the writing & story. The dialogue was very bleh & the story, well... needs more work than the dialogue...
Now where it kinda falls appart is the writing & story. The dialogue was very bleh & the story, well... needs more work than the dialogue...
# 17
Posted:
Apr 18 2007, 12:58 PM
Jes. Dude Black, Grey, and White are the colors that make you feel it.
# 16
Posted:
Apr 17 2007, 09:10 PM
Njn; your pencils are tight and I\'m loving the angles+paneling. My only complaints are shit text and questionable scanning; the 50% grey boxes make black text hard to read, and the white boxes just look shoved in there. Maybe if you wanna keep with the 50%-grey boxes, you should switch to white text, and for white boxes/bubbles make \'em a little see-through to keep it consistent. ++Also work with that levels tool, some of the greyish paper fits, but mostly it just looks messy. Ink could really make your linework pop, but if you\'re gonna go for a pencil-thing, at least clean it up so it looks more intentional and less rushed.
# 15
Posted:
Apr 16 2007, 04:19 PM
SWEET! I knew your skill was great Njinesir, man i can\'t wait tell i battle you .....when i put my guy on the map> Keep it up Bro and can\'t WAIT TO SEE YOUR NEXT BATTLE! sorry Rookie that you didn\'t make it i hope you make it next time man.
# 14
Posted:
Apr 16 2007, 02:52 PM
Rookie... where are ya mang?
Njn: Very very good bud! You and Canaan really have the anatomy and style down to a T. Unfortunetly for this comic, it was just too one sided for my tastes. Nameless walks in, kappa appears, kappa attacks, nameless wins effortlessly. You gotta give your opponent SOME credit at least! But, artwise you really rocked dude, no doubt in my mind, I would like to see more backgrounds from ya though, some pages seemed a bit too empty.
Welcome to void Njn, try getting a few more fights in before hopping over to that new fighter you\'re planning! You got me intrested in this character, so roll with it!
Njn: Very very good bud! You and Canaan really have the anatomy and style down to a T. Unfortunetly for this comic, it was just too one sided for my tastes. Nameless walks in, kappa appears, kappa attacks, nameless wins effortlessly. You gotta give your opponent SOME credit at least! But, artwise you really rocked dude, no doubt in my mind, I would like to see more backgrounds from ya though, some pages seemed a bit too empty.
Welcome to void Njn, try getting a few more fights in before hopping over to that new fighter you\'re planning! You got me intrested in this character, so roll with it!
# 13
Posted:
Apr 16 2007, 02:48 PM
as for Namless - sometimes text was hard to read, and some background were so sharp that they were \"too close\" but it\'s awsome pice anyway
too bad Kappa couldn\'t finish his comics
too bad Kappa couldn\'t finish his comics
# 12
Posted:
Apr 12 2007, 02:44 PM
I\'m not sleepin\' on anyone here. I\'ve seen artists get nice in here when they wanna.
# 11
Posted:
Apr 10 2007, 01:54 PM
your right man my bad i shouldn\'t have judged your skill so draw hard and fight like never before cause i know this fight will not be easyl
# 10
Posted:
Apr 9 2007, 08:33 PM
Criller: \"\"Oh yeah, man. Kappa DOESN\'T stand a chance AGAINST my HOMIE Nameless! Yeah! I\'VE been WAITING for this for a long time! But nice try, man.\"
The fight hasn\'t even reached its deadline yet, let alone get posted. So it\'s rather unfair to tell someone that they\'ve had a \"nice try\" before you\'ve seen the finished product don\'t you think? It makes me suspicious as to whether your voting will be biased *sigh*.
The fight hasn\'t even reached its deadline yet, let alone get posted. So it\'s rather unfair to tell someone that they\'ve had a \"nice try\" before you\'ve seen the finished product don\'t you think? It makes me suspicious as to whether your voting will be biased *sigh*.
# 9
Posted:
Apr 8 2007, 04:28 PM
mann great i cant wait to see nameless
u too kappa hope ta see a great fight
u too kappa hope ta see a great fight
# 8
Posted:
Apr 6 2007, 05:17 PM
oh yeah man Kappa don\'t stand a chance again my homee Nameless! yeah i been weighting for this for a long time! but nice try man
# 7
Posted:
Apr 5 2007, 07:48 AM
You gonna be ready, Rook?
# 6
Posted:
Mar 26 2007, 11:35 PM
Holy crap o:
# 5
Posted:
Mar 26 2007, 02:45 PM
guess who\'s back...back again... rookie\'s back! tell a friend... guess who\'s back guess who\'s back guess who\'s back...
let\'s get retarded in here!
let\'s get retarded in here!
# 4
Posted:
Mar 26 2007, 08:58 AM
Kappa, back from the dead..i can\'t believe it.
# 3
Posted:
Mar 26 2007, 01:38 AM
go wild!
# 2
Posted:
Mar 25 2007, 06:41 PM
Should be fun....time to knock off the rust.
# 1
Posted:
Mar 25 2007, 05:38 PM
This be a wicked fight yo! Oh, Nameless...I got my eyes on you!
Give it all ya got guys!
Give it all ya got guys!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Apr 23rd, 2007
Votes Cast:
50
Page Views:
1892
Winner:
Njhinesjr
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