Cab, I'm kind of intimidated by how many pages you pumped out in 24 hours. Good job on that.
Arts, you spent your day making a joke that got me to laugh. Good job on that.
These were both nicely done.
24 hr Battle- My Furry Friend and me / Mayor Miranda Munroe vs. Harlow Ironlocke
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Jan 7 2021, 04:58 PM
# 7
Posted:
Jan 7 2021, 02:56 AM
Arts: hey you've got the jokes, i like the jokes, that's cool and good! i'll second what cy said that the memes are kind of used haphazardly. because i go into a meme expecting it to be used in one way, and you don't represent that dynamic at all and are essentially just using the aesthetic, i end up rebounding off the comic at an oblique angle.
# 6
Posted:
Jan 3 2021, 05:38 PM
24 hours of comiccccsss!
ARTS- I laughed out loud over Miranda yelling over the counter at Harlow. Nice gag right off the first page and revisited when we get to the last. This 24hr battle was such an indulgent 'you gotta be in void to get it' series of in-jokes, which I enjoyed (also OMg I'm a villainy bar now XD). It's incredibly comic nerdy and I am here for it. After coming off your monster leaper comic the quality of this definitely took a dive, but the spirit of the memes and your humor kept things aloft. And I mean this was done in 24hrs- I know I couldn't pump out this amount in that time. I hope that if you keep up taking these 24hr challenges you find a means to punch up your inks and general panel to panel quality.
ARTS- I laughed out loud over Miranda yelling over the counter at Harlow. Nice gag right off the first page and revisited when we get to the last. This 24hr battle was such an indulgent 'you gotta be in void to get it' series of in-jokes, which I enjoyed (also OMg I'm a villainy bar now XD). It's incredibly comic nerdy and I am here for it. After coming off your monster leaper comic the quality of this definitely took a dive, but the spirit of the memes and your humor kept things aloft. And I mean this was done in 24hrs- I know I couldn't pump out this amount in that time. I hope that if you keep up taking these 24hr challenges you find a means to punch up your inks and general panel to panel quality.
# 5
Posted:
Jan 3 2021, 04:20 AM
Cab - I don’t think I’ve seen you draw furries before but Harlow looks great! I really liked how you did his face in particular. Also, is that some Lackadaisycats inspiration I spy in the shocked panel on the first page? Also enjoyed the story, short and sweet
Arts - Most of the memes here fell flat for me, but I SNORTED at “Kozispoon scarmatch villainy”. I think the reason they didn’t work was because some of them didn’t fit the content well and were kinda twisted to fit better, so were in this weird limbo of not fitting enough AND not being similar enough to the original to land. Like, the woman yelling at a cat meme? The cat is supposed to be confused, so it doesn’t really fit Harlow’s annoyance/anger. Then you made him look more angry than confused anyway, so any remaining impact the meme would have had is totally lost. Sorry for going on so long about a meme XD I know this was a 24 hour battle, but imo it’s something you can keep in mind for longer comics containing memes. Also it’s like... there’s a lot of subconscious stuff going on to make memes work so, yeah.
Arts - Most of the memes here fell flat for me, but I SNORTED at “Kozispoon scarmatch villainy”. I think the reason they didn’t work was because some of them didn’t fit the content well and were kinda twisted to fit better, so were in this weird limbo of not fitting enough AND not being similar enough to the original to land. Like, the woman yelling at a cat meme? The cat is supposed to be confused, so it doesn’t really fit Harlow’s annoyance/anger. Then you made him look more angry than confused anyway, so any remaining impact the meme would have had is totally lost. Sorry for going on so long about a meme XD I know this was a 24 hour battle, but imo it’s something you can keep in mind for longer comics containing memes. Also it’s like... there’s a lot of subconscious stuff going on to make memes work so, yeah.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 31 2020, 11:30 PM
Arts: stMeeemmmeeees.
this made me laugh.
Cab: So fast. So detailed. What do they feed you?
this made me laugh.
Cab: So fast. So detailed. What do they feed you?
# 3
Posted:
Dec 31 2020, 02:22 AM
More comics! Yay!
@Cab: I love your art style omg, loved their interaction! Miranda cares for her friends, awww
@Artsandgoodies: I've been snickering at the memes lol! Funny and great!
@Cab: I love your art style omg, loved their interaction! Miranda cares for her friends, awww
@Artsandgoodies: I've been snickering at the memes lol! Funny and great!
# 2
Posted:
Dec 31 2020, 01:56 AM
Arts! This really got me to smile, not just a little one, a big one.
You really brought the memes.
And Cab! Her poor monkey mooks! I loved seeing the glimpse of them not as monkeys
You really brought the memes.
And Cab! Her poor monkey mooks! I loved seeing the glimpse of them not as monkeys
# 1
Posted:
Dec 31 2020, 01:36 AM
Bravo sir, Arts you did it again it was such a great funny read, I loved it.
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Cab- Art wise I thought you did a good job drawing an anthro character in your own unique way- Miranda is also very cute! Your productivity continues to amaze me, you obviously have no issues turning out impressive page counts with plenty of detail. Maybe its time to start injecting more colour/ shading into your work? :0
Arts- This was super entertaining, a lot of the jokes landed for me! This was a particularly impressive showing for a 24-hour comic.