kid-This fight is a major upgrade from your previous ones dude! But be careful with your anatomy, I notice you have some monstrous heads with tiny bodies in several panels like on the first page when P2 is saying \"so kid I heard u been looking for me\" (and dude spell out \"you\" please hehe) his head is like massive and his body is like this little tiny thing. I noticed you having that problem in a lot of panels, so just something to be careful of in the future. I liked the coloring you had but it got a little muddy in some areas, it would help to have a more clear light source. I was really impressed with your fight but I felt there could have been a little more there story wise.
Fel-The coloring was orgasmic as always but be careful with your negative space dude! A lot of panels looked so empty and dead compared to the lovely job you did on pages 4(page 4 still makes me all hot and bothered) and 5, you\'re getting more confident in your backgrounds and it shows there so just keep it up. I did notice page 3\'s coloring looked a little off, to me it looked like you resized the image before you flattened the layers so the coloring got a little out of place, it gave it a slight blurry looked which bothered me. I would also love to see you bust out with a better font, maybe something a little bolder from http://blambot.com The only other thing I really noticed is page 7, the blur tool. You make me cry you can do a lot of really cool things with lines to imply motion, pick up some manga ie Rurouni Kenshin is a good one to look at
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5403/kenshinoa2.jpg
this is a page I scanned from Rurouni Kensin, you can just feel the impact of that punch from the linework alone, if you did something like like that it\'d be great and a lot more effective than using the blur tool. It can successfully be done even if you\'re coloring your work. Other than that the battle looked great and is the best I\'ve seen from you in a while!
KID vs. P2
Critiques & Comments
# 21
Posted:
Feb 13 2007, 03:56 PM
# 20
Posted:
Feb 12 2007, 12:50 PM
Fel, you really took all that stuff people were saying to heart, didn\'t you? The writing in this is the best I\'ve seen from you, and you did something with the fight that\'s different from your usual. I\'m seriously impressed. I also love the amospheric touches you put in the backgrounds of your panels.
Kid, I liked your coloring, and your action sequences, and the fact that you weren\'t afraid to let your character lose, but there still seems like there was something missing from your fight: setting. I didn\'t get a good feel for where the fight was going on, or what had happened just before the action. I hope this isn\'t the end of Kid, because I like what you do and I like to see veteran characters fight.
Kid, I liked your coloring, and your action sequences, and the fact that you weren\'t afraid to let your character lose, but there still seems like there was something missing from your fight: setting. I didn\'t get a good feel for where the fight was going on, or what had happened just before the action. I hope this isn\'t the end of Kid, because I like what you do and I like to see veteran characters fight.
# 19
Posted:
Feb 10 2007, 05:50 AM
dang kid and felle you didn\'t make this easy did ya?
You both took opposite ways of writing the story. p2 \'s got this kickass intro that goes straight from his last battle, allowing for some relax time. Plus all the city scenes rocked.
kid you went straight into the battle and blew it all away. Great battle dudes!
You both took opposite ways of writing the story. p2 \'s got this kickass intro that goes straight from his last battle, allowing for some relax time. Plus all the city scenes rocked.
kid you went straight into the battle and blew it all away. Great battle dudes!
# 18
Posted:
Feb 9 2007, 08:11 PM
Kid: Wow, that coloring. Just wow. Some intense pages right there. Love your panelings work but I think you could be more experimental with your angles and shots. Beautiful work though, tee hee.
Feller: You know you have it man, I just want to be a pansy and repeat it. Fresh colors, fresh lines, fresh shots. I GUESS maybe you could shade some stuff more, some pages had lotsa coloring some didn\'t; some consistency would be handsome of you. But. You know. Your hot. So theres that.
Awesome stuff. AH.
Feller: You know you have it man, I just want to be a pansy and repeat it. Fresh colors, fresh lines, fresh shots. I GUESS maybe you could shade some stuff more, some pages had lotsa coloring some didn\'t; some consistency would be handsome of you. But. You know. Your hot. So theres that.
Awesome stuff. AH.
# 17
Posted:
Feb 9 2007, 04:38 PM
This was great on both sides in my opinion.
Fel- Nice job on your stuff as usual,I would give a crit but I really cant think of one now...It\'ll come to me eventually.
Kid- Dude you are improvin by leaps and bounds in my humble opinion, only thing I thought was that some of the anatomy fluctuated in the earlier parts of the battle. And you already got the typo, so, Sides that nice work man. You gotta tell sauce to check this one out.
(P.S- I was rootin for ya!!!XD)
Fel- Nice job on your stuff as usual,I would give a crit but I really cant think of one now...It\'ll come to me eventually.
Kid- Dude you are improvin by leaps and bounds in my humble opinion, only thing I thought was that some of the anatomy fluctuated in the earlier parts of the battle. And you already got the typo, so, Sides that nice work man. You gotta tell sauce to check this one out.
(P.S- I was rootin for ya!!!XD)
# 16
Posted:
Feb 2 2007, 02:07 PM
KID..... There are some who\'s on your side.... They just wait in silent awe to see your work..... It\'ll be good.... Like both styles of art work, and I can\'t figure out who\'s going to win.... It can only be a close one....
# 15
Posted:
Feb 1 2007, 10:15 PM
heheh, just a joke, but i do gotta warn u guys b4 u chew my head off about it..... THERE IS A TYPO ON PAGE 5!!!!! i think i wrote....\"now that i can can.....\", i meant to write \"now I can win\", or somethin like that.......otherwise i\'m pretty happy wit my fight...... hope u guys like it too...
# 14
Posted:
Jan 31 2007, 11:46 PM
damn the messed up, ain nobody rootin\' 4 me!? *sulks in a corner* =(
# 13
Posted:
Jan 29 2007, 08:52 PM
This is gonna be a good one. Fel as usual I cant wait to see whoat you come up with.
And Kid, let he brothahood live on. *raises fist in the air*
And Kid, let he brothahood live on. *raises fist in the air*
# 12
Posted:
Jan 9 2007, 09:57 AM
Hi guys, my first comment in EV here. Felony, I\'ve been watching you lately, I hope you\'ll win, and maybe once I got my character on we can fight sometime. Not that you\'ll ever lose. xD
I\'m a new with comics.
I\'m a new with comics.
# 11
Posted:
Nov 29 2006, 10:41 AM
^___^ can\'t wait to see the outcome of this, it\'s deffinately going to be amazing.
Good luck to both participants
Good luck to both participants
# 10
Posted:
Nov 28 2006, 12:03 AM
I know you were workin towards this battle kid...g luck!! U to fell!!
# 9
Posted:
Nov 27 2006, 07:31 PM
Well I saw a panel from Fel\'s fight and he\'s going to be very tough to beat. If his whole fight looks like the panel I saw it\'ll be amazing. He really listened to what Marley and James told him
# 8
Posted:
Nov 27 2006, 02:35 PM
people are COMPLAINING about fel\'s lineart, dang, that sucks, i like his lines, man do what u do bro, anybody that got a prob wit ya stuff NEEDS TO take it to the drawing board AND PUT THEIR PENCIL WHERE THEIR MOUF IS, SCRAIGHT UP!!! DEATH TO ALL!!!!!
# 7
Posted:
Nov 27 2006, 12:06 PM
For people complaining about Fel\'s line art...
by all means...
leave him the fukk alone and let him focus on it. Your expectancy and complaints are fukking it up even more.
Other than that, go ninja on eachother!
by all means...
leave him the fukk alone and let him focus on it. Your expectancy and complaints are fukking it up even more.
Other than that, go ninja on eachother!
# 6
Posted:
Nov 26 2006, 06:27 PM
I look forward to your pages KID. I also look forward to Tantrum.
# 5
Posted:
Nov 26 2006, 01:23 AM
Oh, so there was a previous battle and it was canceled or something right? Easy mistake to make on my part.
# 4
Posted:
Nov 25 2006, 02:28 PM
yea this fight was suppose to go down long time ago....but its on now...i just got out of art boot camp thanks to mar and james and i\'m ready to strut my stuff.
let the black on black violence BEGIN!!!!
let the black on black violence BEGIN!!!!
# 3
Posted:
Nov 25 2006, 10:13 AM
Yo phil u know this is the 1st time we\'ve fought right? but yea, long time comin\' or at least for me time tah bring da pain 4 da BROTHERHOOD!!!!!!!
# 2
Posted:
Nov 25 2006, 04:56 AM
Fel...i am going to fukk your sister in the ass after this.
# 1
Posted:
Nov 25 2006, 03:20 AM
Didn\'t you guys fight already?! Sheesh! You\'re as bad as GSVR vs J-Pop and James vs Dan! >:I
Ah... who cares ;3. Good luck you two, Fel, I know you\'ve actually got some time to do this fight, so get as much done as you can, don\'t make james mad though dude. Kid, I\'m looking forward to seeing what you\'ve got for us now, you improve so much after each and every fight!
Ah... who cares ;3. Good luck you two, Fel, I know you\'ve actually got some time to do this fight, so get as much done as you can, don\'t make james mad though dude. Kid, I\'m looking forward to seeing what you\'ve got for us now, you improve so much after each and every fight!
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Your pretty good at drawing action and fighting, but try to use bigger panels from time to time or at least don\'t cover some of it with text. I know planning locations of text is a bitch cuz of the room you need for it.
If the Brotherhood is finished...there is always room for you in my legion.
*evil laughter*
- Good fight.
Great man, just great!
Felle (as you said this is a shout out to me and wanted crits, so i shall lecture your black ass to death) - the first few pages are fukking epic. stealing some elements from my background blended with your own shit works pretty damn well, lol. And where are my thongs and beer nigga.
Anyways, your angle work is starting to improve as well as your creative action sequences, some angles need a bit of work, like where Kid is about to hit P2. It kinda looks like he\'s standing..i dunno..underneath him. Angles are quite difficult i know, but yer trying your best and the only advice i can offer is to bend your reality or as LeSean once told me: \"Think shape, not line\".
But what bugs the shit outta me is some shots are either overblurred or some of those mawfukkers don\'t have a face. It kills some of the action that follows. I love the dynamics and detail on that page where P fukks up Kid\'s arm. I like the sequence with the children as well, the expression on their faces. Well paced.
Your colouring keeps improving massivly, but try to work on the lines as well man, use some more details in the characters or clothing.
I\'ll end this lecture with what i couldn\'t help but love about your fight:
P2 moving through the city, detailed as hell. The angle after Kid\'s blast where you only see P\'s shadow. The top angle where the attack swirls around him.
Awesome dudes, just awesome!
Black on black violence. This is one of the most enjoyable match ups i\'ve read.
(go follow angie\'s advice...both of you, go go go)