Agh, this is great! It's a crying shame you couldn't make it! :'I
I really like your watercolors, especially on page 2. Looks a bit messy, especially near the end, but I’m guessing you were running low on time by then. You’ve only had 1 or 2 week battles so far, it would be interesting to see what you could do with a longer deadline.
Ps: I love your character and I will try to keep her memory alive :3
Cupcake Miller
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Nov 30 2011, 06:36 PM
# 8
Posted:
Nov 30 2011, 10:20 AM
Thanks, cult!
I agree with you, I was struggling with the story and the pacing the entire time. I'm going to keep pluggin' away at making both the visuals and the pacing work together ahead of time!
I agree with you, I was struggling with the story and the pacing the entire time. I'm going to keep pluggin' away at making both the visuals and the pacing work together ahead of time!
# 7
Posted:
Nov 29 2011, 02:13 PM
i really like this character but i cant say my love was reflected in this piece. even though there where some very good visuals especially the last panel on page two! but all in all i could not understand the stories pace i felt like to much happened to fast and the quality started to die in the end. but i absolutely love your style and use of water color shapes with outlines
keep creating you have alot of potential
keep creating you have alot of potential
# 6
Posted:
Nov 25 2011, 08:59 PM
yeah, it can't go up until voting is done on the battle this was meant for.
# 5
Posted:
Nov 25 2011, 07:12 PM
It probably won't be up until the voting period is over.
# 4
Posted:
Nov 25 2011, 07:02 PM
where is this ):
# 3
Posted:
Nov 22 2011, 09:09 AM
Can't wait!
# 2
Posted:
Nov 22 2011, 01:22 AM
dubbleposterrywhere
# 1
Posted:
Nov 22 2011, 01:22 AM
It's finally done. I apologize to JAZ and all the other awesome Millers for not gettin' 'er done earlier.
Cupcake and Rayne were really fun to draw, though--I'd like to revisit this story sometime if I can.
Cupcake and Rayne were really fun to draw, though--I'd like to revisit this story sometime if I can.
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Dec 6th, 2011
Votes Cast:
7
Page Views:
1527
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