[bicentennial man]

man this is some good stuff you have a very strong style and your very creative
but your work looks really flat and static maybe its the poses or maybe the thick
outline you use often but other than that keep it goin

[The Pacifier]

lol
im starting to think its the strong black outline

[The Pacifier]

some stuff that i finished about a week ago
not much but i really like the linework
if anyone wants to color let me know and ill hook you up with a copy

not really supposed to be anyone

me and my teddy

[squid]

that stuff is nice.. I like how the girl's hair looks like shredded paper. :3
I think your black and white pictures look better than the colored ones. Somehow your colors are not doing justice to your inks. Maybe there is just generally too *much* color there, and if you pulled back on the number of colors you use, it would give your lines some time to shine.

[The Pacifier]

thanks squidman
lately ive been trying to work more on my lines and leave my coloring more to photoshop
which i am working on as well

[The Pacifier]

havent really been drawing much lately, but schools out so i plan to post more soon

Harley Quinn marker sketch>marker ran out

Pencil Sketch

[The Pacifier]

Has been a long time since ive posted anything here, so im dumping some stuff
also working on some void stuff, will post soon


one of my original characters

my oc on a vespa (wonky scan)

another character concept

i have no idea

a wierd goblin thing...reminds me of hellboy
   
Just somethin                             

[The Pacifier]

Havent posted in a while, wasnt sure if I was supposed to start a new topic or anything
This is basically some stuff that ive done over the past year or so. Everything from AP to just classroom sketches
ive been working with markers alot, lately ive been trying to get into more paints
And since this seems to be the only place that i can get constructive criticism on the internet
your thoughts/opinions are greatly appreciated


a text as art project

marker/acrylic

marker

marker

trying to work on comics more

marker morning sketch

water color

marker morning sketch

marker

[E.W. Schneider]

Naw, you're just fine, dude.

This all looks really good and is a big improvement over what I remember seeing from you like 2 years ago, dude. I think it's kind of weird that your guy's hair is going straight up along with his face instead of moving in front of it, but hey, maybe he gels.

The markers you're using are really great looking and you've made great stride in using them. The blood stain part is a little unreadable though. I would try incorporating more white in there to pick up the difference and make it pop more in spots.

However, maybe work with some variation on eyes though. I know we mostly only saw one character, but the other one we did had the same blank white circle eyes. Throw it up a little, it'll make the people with those eyes that much more interesting and stand out more. You've done it in the past, I know, but just make sure you don't lose that.

I absolutely adore the comic page and the final picture too. You should get back to battling soon dude, you've really made leaps and bounds artistically.

[The Pacifier]

character development

octopus inks over watercolor

Athena linework probably going to add more to it later

something I did for my valentine

Where the wild things are sketch