I agree partially with Eminkey. You don't need to strive for cleanliness necessarily, look at Jho's work. Messy and still incredibly high quality, it works for her style. Same with yours. What you need is clarity. You shower everything with hatching and speedlines kinda haphazardly. CHILL OUT. As for your text, I'd say stick with handwritten text-- but lay out straight lines with some tool to right your text on. That way it doesn't look sloppy in your bubbles. You handwriting's fine, you just aren't clear enough with it.
You have had this problem since forever, I can see it in a bunch of your work: You draw arms way too long and legs too short. Mainly the arm thing, the legs aren't TOO short, but the arms are hella long. Not sure what to recommend for that, but if you know the problem you should be able to find a way to remedy it.
One last thing that Eminkey touched on: PENCILS. I know you don't use them, I know you think they're the devil, but try them. You probably can't be as fluid with them as your straight inks, but that'll come with practice. I think it'd keep your proportions from going wonky, which they do (especially in your trads).
einsam
Colbitzer
@ 3:32 PM Apr 17th