[Craqued]

ah man im really diggin' all the textures. i'd like to see some grays in there but thats just preference, its really sharp, man.

[Monday]

[Aluísio C. Santos]

"X"

[GearZero]

When you shade with lines, do you use a ruler? Or just freehand? My lines always come out inconsistent and cross each other lol. But that's like... 1/5 of the time.

[Monday]

free hand.

I can draw most straight lines without using a ruler for some frames (bad habit)

[(Pi)]

The comic is a good piece of work, minus the pages you said are being re-worked for quality. There's some editing problems, though, although I'm not sure how important that is to your project (eg, your spell it "Graham" to begin with, but change to "Gram" afterwards).

The text is also a bit mis-sized for some bubbles, it seems like, and the boldness makes it a bit difficult to read in places.

[Nex in a Box]

i expect to be reading your manga in the future. keep up the work.

[Monday]

[CrimsonViper38]

Black's return draws closer, yes?
thats a warming thought

[Wei Ingnan]

everything looks good.....

 except for the ultra sloppy mouse work on the flap of the coat tail..

.....and the white pixellated line on the inside of the pant leg

..and the little grey bit on the sleeve...

..and the different shades of black that show up on a brighter monitor










....and your mother dresses you funny

[GearZero]

..and the different shades of black that show up on a brighter monitor

So I'm not that insane.

[Monday]

[Monday]

Page 9 to a concurrent story involving Clandestein
http://mrmonday.deviantart.com/art/N0C-re-Cover-61625092

[jho]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaah that gay knight

[Monday]

SSSSSHHHHHHHHHH SHHHHHHHHHHH YOU'll RUIN THE SURPRISE !

[Weepy]

Lovin' the water effects!

[Monday]

Of Clandestein now has a new home at OVERKILL SUNSHINE!

http://oksunshine.net/manga/NOC/

[HAVEN!]

i wish your comics were easier to read D:

[Monday]

The Church of Monday denies this blasphemy


also , rewrote the text.

[Monday]

also sketches







I fulley rendered this from a 40 second thumb, fell in love wit hthe pose and then--

[squid]

yaay I like these, they seem less stiff than some of your other shtuff.
In the last one, I like the two figures on the left better than the other guy, because I am not sure what that guy's doing. What was he doing before that girl shoved a sharp thing through his chest? Was he holding up his axe in a victory stance?

[Monday]

I wanted to achieve an awkward twisted motion, like the force of the knife spun him or something,

and then when the shadowing happened, I tripped up and made it look like he was standing on the ground.

Looking back at the thumb, I realised that a lot of things were off/backwards (she was supposed to stab him from the side) and the impromptu inking didn't help ;<

[Monday]

[Monday]

[squid]

I read her description on DA, I thinks she's cool..
Just some anatomy issues.. her arms are a bit longer than they should be. Also one appears to be long than the other. And something is happening with her hip, it's kind of like it dips down where I thiiiink her pelvic ridge would be, on her left side-viewer's-right. Makes it appear like her leg is disloacted.
Anyways I like the center one better than the other two, that one looks the most finished. On the left one, maybe if you just played around with the negative space on the left, that might do it.