While I'm not that great at finding stuff to critique on, I think I see a few things.
First, your hands, either you haven't been practicing hands too much or you rush them a LOT. For the most part they seem to not have any structure at all, or they are very un-proportionate. Look at your latest picture for example, first look at the left hand, I have no idea whats going on there even and on the right hand he has giant fingers and a mini palm.
Also your girls doesn't look very girlish, neither in facial structure nor in their bodies, in both of the Angie shots she has quite wide shoulders and slim hips, which you should know isn't very girly (though you might have deliberately gone for a more butch look on her and then I will take back that statement) . And that pic of the turning girl totally has a guys face.
The best thing though with your pictures is that they look very fluid and nice (especially on the turning girl pic)
Hope I don't come off to harsh, but I have pretty much both those problems myself so i know how disturbing they can be.
Birthright
Saal, Louise Ambre-Aliona, and Llaana
@ 3:44 PM Apr 16th