Snowy Incubator

Snowy Incubator

Snowy Incubator
« on: Jun 05, 2019, 09:50 PM »


I've been wanting to join Void for a while, and I've finally gotten around to starting. I'm trying to finish up the intro pages soon here..

Re: Snowy Incubator
« Reply #1 on: Jun 06, 2019, 10:29 AM »
Dairyu is an interesting design for sure.
Art looks very good and polished. good luck with your Pages. you are definetely doing this properly :)

what i miss so far is a little background over her place in the world, motivation for actions and personality.

another thing is the second image with red hair. i feel like this is kind of a dynamic of her powers but right now assuming she´s purely air based i´m just confused what that is.

In any case keep going this is looking absulutely swell.

Re: Snowy Incubator
« Reply #2 on: Jun 06, 2019, 02:33 PM »
Dairyu is an interesting design for sure.
Art looks very good and polished. good luck with your Pages. you are definetely doing this properly :)

what i miss so far is a little background over her place in the world, motivation for actions and personality.

another thing is the second image with red hair. i feel like this is kind of a dynamic of her powers but right now assuming she´s purely air based i´m just confused what that is.

In any case keep going this is looking absulutely swell.

Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm changing the intro a bit to be more focused on her personality and reason for being in Void, I appreciate you bringing that up!
« Last Edit: Jun 26, 2019, 12:54 AM by SnowyMoth »

 

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