Hey guys, I've uploaded this image, as I want critique on this before I add close-ups, detail thumbnails etc. I'm really looking to improve in pretty much every area I can whilst here, line work, storytelling, colouring, anatomy, action shots, everything. Any and all constructive criticism is needed so please help me improve!
Anyway, here is my character..
Vinny King6ft 3inches
25
Vinny King is an professional football/soccer player who has made it to the top of the game. He has prevailed in multiple European teams and is regarded as 'one of the best'. After winning a 12th title in his latest season, he disappeared, captured by a criminal outfit, and taken to a far away unknown location. Their interests are compromised should he continue to play, although he isn't aware of how or why.
He soon discovers ancient artefacts that grant him control over a phenomenal force. A force contained within a spherical artefact. Alongside the ball are ancient boots. The footwear is in some way linked to the ball, and they enable him to harness its power, and only him.
Without the boots, the ball feels like a ball of marble, and weighs as much. With the boots, it 'activates', seeming much lighter than it is, and able to bounce like a standard football. With his new tools, Vinny is out for revenge, he needs to find those responsible for his disappearance, and uncover the mysteries surrounding the artefacts.
EDIT
Just wanted to add a little about the occurring themes and design of my character.
I am a huge fan of goofy contexts, hence the somewhat unruly background/mish-mash of over-the-top themes. Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles being a prime example of one of my major influences. I even regard Hellboy as a bit tongue in cheek, but I really enjoy it. This guy has been shot in the head, but then resurrected, and also has access to ancient/alien artefacts that amplify his soccer skills to form a crazy combat style. It's something I want to roll with, as my influences and inspiration for wanting to get into the creation of comics, comes from the crazy super hero stories and the awesome action. I doubt my comics will be particularly brooding, all that meaningful or with a deep underlying message. At least for now, I just want to enjoy creating and portraying entertainment in an immature form of people punching each other and stopping people from destroying the world.
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