Wei totally nailed it. This page would look so good with several close-ups before zooming out to an establishing shot. I know we're always going on about backgrounds and not relying on close-ups all the time, but it's all about when to use each technique and when not to. In this case, where all of the action is focused on your one character, having more close-ups can really connect us to how he's feeling. Usually we ask for fewer close-ups because there are multiple characters or other things going on, and we need more information to really establish space and position. But in your case, all it takes is one establishing shot to define where everything is, so you can spend more time zooming right on in to the character's face and show us how he's feeling that way.
I'm super stoked to see you putting thought into your backgrounds and not skimping on them! That's the kind of detail that tells me you're really going to put your heart and soul into making comics, and I'm excited to see you progress and grow here on the site. Please, keep it up!
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Colbitzer
@ 3:32 PM Apr 17th