Miyajima Minori

Miyajima Minori
« on: Mar 24, 2013, 10:57 PM »
So I finally decided to join Void, and decided to leave this one here as I work out another quick one for something soon.



Name: Miyajima Minori
Age: 27
Height: 165cm
Occupation: Attorney at law, Prosecutor

Miyajima Minori came from a certain highly advanced city built atop certain artificial island. From a particular period in time on the said island, certain residents have developed abilities as a result of a mutation of sorts. But that is another story. All you have to know is Minori was one of them.

Despite many an Esper-related incident, she has managed to live comparatively normal life and earned her lawyer's license. Seeing as Void has a much higher demand for lawyers, she decided to move to Void.

Ability - Minori's ability is [Perception]. It's functions can primarily be grouped into two.

The first is enhanced perception of the highest kind. She is capable of taking in information from her surroundings far greater than a human consciously does. This comes in handy in her work in that she can tell if you're lying.

The second is to broadcast information which other organisms would take in and hence "perceive" it.

Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #1 on: Mar 25, 2013, 01:53 PM »
I love that this character came to VOID because it needs more lawyers than other cities XD

I think this story has a lot of potential, and I'd love to see some finished character art and intro pages of her. I don't really have anything to critique since your art is unfinished and we haven't seen much of her character/personality yet, so I hope to see that in the intro pages!

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Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #2 on: Mar 25, 2013, 01:59 PM »
PAAAAAAGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS
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Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #3 on: Mar 25, 2013, 02:00 PM »
This is a fun idea! Show us some pages!
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Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #4 on: Mar 29, 2013, 05:47 AM »
No pages yet, but have a better reference sheet.



Pages will be drawn out once I've settled stuff I need settled by this week.
« Last Edit: Mar 29, 2013, 05:51 AM by Jiisuri »

Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #5 on: Mar 29, 2013, 05:54 AM »
Love this so far. I really like how you illustrated the demonstrations of her abilities in the design sheet. Looking forward to more :)

Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #6 on: Apr 16, 2013, 05:14 AM »


Pg 1 is sketched

Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #7 on: Apr 16, 2013, 06:14 AM »
2nd panel: that word bubble can cover part of the lamp. It doesn't need to be squished in between the panel border and the lamp stand.
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Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #8 on: Apr 16, 2013, 08:25 AM »
Unless the lamp is talking in that panel... which is what it looks like at the moment hahah.

I'm really loving the attention to environment and variety of angles here! I can't wait to see more! :)

Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #9 on: Apr 17, 2013, 01:44 AM »

Awright here's pg 2 sketch.

EDIT: And here I experiment with screentones.

http://25.media.tumblr.com/6e120201da66bfb2c59566f5d9d08e9d/tumblr_mlfulr2Ycf1snp68zo1_1280.jpg
« Last Edit: Apr 18, 2013, 12:12 AM by Jiisuri »

Re: Miyajima Minori
« Reply #10 on: Apr 18, 2013, 01:57 AM »
The tones pop Minori up from the background pretty well - for good and bad. You might like to add toning to decors too, to embed her into the scene better :)

Oh, and adjust the speech bubble in the second panel, unless the lamp is talking.
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