Umm sweet!!!
On the second one, really nice composition. It's not your typical city scape backdrop, there's depth and interesting elements to it. You have odd color choices though dude. The water is a deep saturated blue, and the buildings are pretty unsaturated. I use a site called colourlovers or adobe kuler at times when I'm stumped on color schemes. Or reference a photo for ideas. Also, the gradient sky looks out of place because its so smooth compared to how you rendered the buildings. I think you render things nicely its your color choices that is weakness here.
The bottom one is AWESOME. Great color choices, and very well rendered. The dimension you gave to the walkway is just great. You could try adding an ambient light source, maybe a yellow or orange to really bring it to life. Just adding something on the opposite-ish side if the color wheel can make something good into something amazing. I'm hoping we'll do a color theory/limited color palette VCU in the future.
99 Problems and a Cat
Croi Desai vs. HR99
@ 12:30 AM Apr 23rd