I'm all for improvement!

I'm all for improvement!
« on: Apr 10, 2012, 01:27 AM »
I thought I'd post here for criticisms and the like! As you can tell, I obviously am not the best artist around, nor am I a good one.



This was a request of a friend's character. I realized that after I finished and uploaded everything, her lips are way too small. >___>

Re: I'm all for improvement!
« Reply #1 on: Apr 10, 2012, 08:14 AM »
Honestly what I'm looking at here is pretty solid. you've got a nice look going in this piece. If a comic were drawn in this style I would be compelled to read it. As for Critique, that depends on where you think you need to grow.

At a glance I would say that there isn't a consistent light source (a problem I have as well). It's all very vague in that sense. You may get a more gentle/softer look and feel if you varied some of your line weights, in the hair for example. Lastly, use your lines to convey the sense of an object. Here I'm looking at the tiara/crown. It feels like it should be finely crafted, the lines for that object alone feels to chaotic.

Again looking good, just my opinions, keep at it. :3
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