LovE Me DeaD

LovE Me DeaD
« on: Nov 13, 2010, 11:31 PM »
Well I don't normally post this kinda stuff to Void, but hey, first time for everything and I could use some real feedback <3
Sooo I'm busting out a new style for a webcomic I'm makin' and I wanted some feed back on some of the main characters and base plot~

The title is LovE Me DeaD (got it from a song by Ludo lol)

This is Creed Lovan, he was recently murdered, but thanks to some stupid kids messing around with a book of evil rituals and weakening the Veil near his grave he was able to come back as a Revenant (sort of an upgrade from just a "zombie"). Now he's back and out for revenge...but there's a few problems. One; it seems forcing one's soul out of Hell is a bit traumatizing and causes rather severe memory loss. Two; whatever the two kids did to open a hole in the Veil seems to have killed one kid and bound Creed to the other one when he broke through.
 
As Creed would say "Shit."




I still have to finish coloring the other main character (I have to get up eaaarly so I'll post him and his little description tomorrow).  
Questions, comments, concerns?

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #1 on: Nov 14, 2010, 06:51 AM »
I think the new style is looking nice! I like the overall design as well. You should probably watch the noses on quarter views though, in that full body shot the nose looks like the nose is a frontal shot nose instead of a quarter view. Moving the bottom of the nose over a bit should help with that. The hands are also looking on the large side.
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LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #2 on: Nov 16, 2010, 04:44 PM »
Thanks Angie .w.~ I'm keeping an eye on my hand proportions and nose positions~


http://lovemedead.smackjeeves.com/ Here's where I'm posting LMD XDDD



So this is my first real complicated drawing with this style and I think it came out awesome :D Can't wait til I finish my first real page (haven't decided if it's gonna be B/W or colored : P yet)
« Last Edit: Nov 16, 2010, 04:46 PM by graten »

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #3 on: Nov 16, 2010, 05:15 PM »
you should be drawing in this style here in void! There's so much personality added in these characters because of it~

The hands are a bit large, but so are the heads  and feet, so it can still work if you just polish it

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #4 on: Nov 16, 2010, 05:20 PM »
I've been working on redoing Lived's design sheet actually lol, I like this style a lot more than my manga/anime one, it's a lot more fun to draw : P So I'm a makin' the switch~

Though it may be a wee while before I have another Void battle XP

Page Ooooone
« Reply #5 on: Nov 18, 2010, 03:40 PM »
Soooo first page is finished X3 And I have to say I like how it came out! I'm already workin on the next page, but any and all crits are welcome~



Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #6 on: Nov 18, 2010, 09:00 PM »
Your colors are vibrant, I especially like the line work you did of him yelling in the reference.

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #7 on: Nov 20, 2010, 09:41 PM »


Lead McCullen

Back back back
« Reply #8 on: Jan 15, 2011, 08:46 AM »
Well a month and a half and one dislocated knee later and I'm back from boot- they kicked me out cuz of my bad knee .w.; Well, it was an experience, but now it's onwards with life (job, college, blah blah blah). And of course jumping back into the fray here on VOID XD


Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #9 on: Jan 15, 2011, 12:16 PM »
Glad to see you're back. I can't wait to see your new art!

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #10 on: Jan 16, 2011, 02:00 AM »
Welcome back my man. I mean girl. Woman.


MARIIIIIINE!!!!

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #11 on: Jan 16, 2011, 09:50 PM »
Good to be back ; D (though it's just 'woman' as I failed boot lol)

A mock cover for a comic I will, one day, in the far far future, eventually make : D


Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #12 on: Jan 19, 2011, 08:15 PM »
I love that song.
Also, Zombies for the win, all the way.

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #13 on: Jan 20, 2011, 07:18 PM »
gotta work on those poses, too stiff, try more dynamic stuff
Get ready- pop it, let's go.
Enter galactic, you and me,
Enter galactic, you and me.

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #14 on: Feb 18, 2011, 08:32 PM »
A messy sketch : P Doodled Creed in CHEW style XD I f**king LOVE that comic <3


Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #15 on: Feb 23, 2011, 10:00 PM »
I'm reworking LMD (brainstorming a better name too)

So here are Gillis, Special Agent Doyle, and Creed.

Gill is a Pooka, a mischievous/sometimes terrifying fey that can turn in to a black goat (as well as other things, but Gil turns in to a goat).

Creed is a Revenant, think of it as a super zombie as in all the gose without the stupid~

Doyle is an agent from- the D.S.R. the Department of Supernatural Regulations- a secret government agency dedicated to keeping the super away from the natural.


Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #16 on: Mar 01, 2011, 11:07 PM »


Goooooooat


oh and I got a tumblr : P
http://phoebethisandthat.tumblr.com/
« Last Edit: Mar 04, 2011, 12:13 AM by graten »

NOT DEAD
« Reply #17 on: Feb 01, 2012, 05:50 PM »


Dear me, life has been crazy the past 7ish months....went through a bunch of sh*t (fought with mother, got kicked out, fell in love, got heartbroken, started school for comp science, and got a dog....among other things). So I now OWN a bitchin laptop and have constant access to the internet/photoshop! First order of business? Get Felix back in the game! I miss doing art so much VOID id such an excellent excuse to draw : )

Doin up a small BB to reintroduce him, should have it finished in a week or so <3


Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #18 on: Feb 01, 2012, 08:42 PM »
Aww yeah, welcome back Graten! Sorry to hear all that stuff going down, but hey, water under the bridge.

Also like the new design sheet!

Re: LovE Me DeaD
« Reply #19 on: Feb 02, 2012, 02:06 PM »
Bring it on in the VOID!
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