Since my comment got deleted, and it actually HAD CRITIQUE IN IT... I'll just go ahead and post my critique again for you. And Wei, you're being just as childish as I am now. Stop it.
I like the whole scale of the picture, it's pretty ambitious. The problem I have is almost everything blends together, since everything is nearly the same line width. Right now, Your main depth cue I see is that stuff closer to the viewer is lower in the composition. There is a bit of overlapping, and while it makes sense in the back part of the image, when it comes to Slaughterface, it gets confusing. He's not overlapping the back part of the image at all, and there's some negative space in there between them. It flattens out Slaughterface. This is true of mostly everything at the bottom of the image. It just feels flat, and not like it belongs in the foreground.
Also, I do like that style of hatching, but with the lack of strong lines to begin with, and having some of the hatching have even stronger lines than the figures makes a lot of the image blend together, and the figures don't stand out as well.
I hope this helps you, and please note that I do enjoy where this is going, and I do enjoy your attitude/outlook on the whole thing
Pyras: Just to make sure... there's a giant hole in the head, right? That would kinda put damper on... well... everything, haha. Good work. I would suggest really work on beautiful flowing lines, as right now, a lot of them break up midway through a straight line for no apparent reason.
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