The profile faces might be a little over-stylized, I think toning down the exaggeration a bit would do wonders. Also, I had no idea how unattractive big noses could be. Maybe that's why it never worked out with that cute Jewish girl...
The photo reference stuff looks fantastic, especially the faces at the beginning and Jeal's legs. Although, if you hate drawing feet, that's usually a good sign you need to draw more of them.
Your characters at the end look really, really stiff. It's fine for the guys standing up-right in neutral poses, but for the guy who's been shot and the two dudes at the bottom, it looks almost unnatural for them to be posing that way. I recommend doing some gestures of athletes in motion for getting the range of the human body down, then gestures of people in a public place to get the natural posture down, both sitting and standing. Most important to understand is the tilt of the shoulders and hips, the lean of the torso, and the twist of the spine. These things are almost never in line with each other, so it's really about finding their relation to each other that makes a pose look right or not.
Keep it up, man, you're looking good!
99 Problems and a Cat
Croi Desai vs. HR99
@ 12:30 AM Apr 23rd