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Intro Story
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Uploaded October 23, 2017
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Linclair
Inker
8 years ago
I guess this is a good time to go ahead and thank you guys for the warm welcome! I appreciate all the critiques and I'll keep those in mind for future comics <333
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zee
All-Rounder
8 years ago
I've been really looking forward to this! Cadenza (and the way you've drawn these characters) is absolutely adorable. You're off to a nice start, I'm really looking forward to seeing you battle and learning more about the character!
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Majikura
All-Rounder
8 years ago
instantly one of my new favorite characters on this site
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Reecer6
All-Rounder
8 years ago
The way you line your characters is so dynamic and communicative! Can't wait to see you fare in a longer battle, because this looks great! (But yeah, the ending to this is very sudden. I guess what happens next is fairly intuitive, but it FEELS like the mystery of the scar ought to be ruminated over for another panel or two before Cadenza enters Void.)
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Hellis
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8 years ago
Welcome! Cadenza is quite a adorable and I am very eager to see what trouble she gets int. I feel that the intro cuts off abruptly. It feels as if there is a page 4 that didn't make it. I think it is becouse you adress her hand and then that's it. There is no payoff to the set up.
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Pocketmouse
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8 years ago
Welcome!!!! Cute character, her little drum butler reminds me a little for Peppermint Butler at the moment, so I'll be interested to see how the dynamic between the two evolves. Your first panel and last panel have lovely backgrounds, it would be good to see this carry through more of your panels as a lot of them are very bare. I feel like 'Let's find out!' could be more of a feature panel, and the lettering could have used a little more love and detail as it's a little on the untidy side as it is. With this panel as well, with the cool looking effects you've included, the backgrounds breaking into darker colours could have helped the effects pop more a look more intense, just something to consider when using special effects like this next time :) Your character seems so cute so far and i love her design, especially the bass clef in the hair, a neat touch!" Can't wait to see what your first battle holds!
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Camel
All-Rounder
8 years ago
what a cool intro, and I am quite smitten with your style and use of color. I can tell that she's going to have some wild, musical battles in the future!
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yarnwitch
All-Rounder
8 years ago
I really love all of this! your style is adorable and her HAIR IS AMAZING. All of this is fun, I love the rebellious streak and the willingness to just, dive in to whatever despite warnings. THIS CHARACTER IS GONNA BE SO FUN. I hope we get to fight sometime!
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Alouisse Ver
All-Rounder
8 years ago
Welcome to Void! And even more so! I wholesomely welcome Cadenza. What an amazing design and concept for her. I'm extremely excited to see how she progresses through Void and the type of interactions she'll be having with other characters! Wonderful use of colors and style. I can't wait to see more from you.
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Radji
All-Rounder
8 years ago
music based character ? hell yes !! This alternate music world of cadenza looks fun to use !
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Corn Of The Breads
All-Rounder
8 years ago
This comic looks wonderful and I love the character expressions and poses it is all great, my only concern is I am not entirely sure what it is I am supposed to gleam of her character from the context of the story, though 4 pages is a small working space so I understand. Id love to see more from this character and really learn how they react to situations.
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Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
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8 years ago
You got me looking forward to the turn of this act!
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Wolfbaloo
All-Rounder
8 years ago
Hi there! Welcome to Void! I'm fairly new to this site as well, and I'd like to share my thoughts about your character: I gotta say I really like your style, has a nice look to it! And your character is easy to read as well as her drummer boy (Insert rimshot here). I gotta say it's interesting that her story is that she found a book of an "Ancient spellbook" from father time from how it sounds. And I look forward into seeing what sort of adventures she finds herself into.
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