Thanks for all of the feedback. I am working on continuing the story now and look forward to some critiques on my art as well.

This is really well-written! I was super engaged the whole time, not the least because I totally understand Stanley's pain of working a bad retail job and feeling stuck in life :'D That cliffhanger really has me wanting to read more, so I hope you'll continue the story!

I need to know more, this is great! Thank you for showing this to us, and I hope the context we gained from it helps with your newer stuff! YAY!

Love love love love this!!! Although it's old, there are some stellar moments where the art really starts to shine. Pages 9 & 10 are appropriately weighty, and the stair panels on page 12 are fab. It's excellently written and paced - I hope we get to see more soon! :D

I really enjoyed the story and progression throughout, big points from me for it being a Slice of Life theme <3 One of my favourite things to read about. Art wise, it is untidy, but since it's an older piece of work I won't go and harp on it. Now, let's see some up-to-date art to go with that great story-telling talent.

won't critique the art cause it's 4 years old and i'm assuming not indicative of what you can do now; that aside I really liked the story and am really interested to see where it goes from here. Would love to battle this character in the future

I won't lie, this comic's story and progression is great. It starts off hitting home right off the bat. Great slice of life style comic about the mundane life of a poor dude in the world. It switched gears at the right point and kept me reading. I had a rough time getting past the quality of art, but then again this is from like 4 years ago so I am letting that shit slide and I wanna see some new junk from ya! I can't really crib this much anymore considering it's age and I don't know where you stand today as an artist/writer. Give us more.

Seriously, when I read your comment about this being from 2013, I was going to PM you and ask you to reconsider uploading old work... but I read it and wow, holy shit, this is a good ass comic. I mean, your quality is poor but you're a really good storyteller. I think you really understand pacing, flow, layout... I just wish it didn't have such a sloppy look. Now, go make some new stuff!

Just a disclaimer: This is a comic I drew around 2013 and never got around to posting. I've only edited minimally and just felt that I needed to put this comic up before creating any more.