Lots of potential here for amusing AND depressing themes it seems like... Yay! I like the transition effect you did at the bottom of page 2, very cool. Best of luck with all your future comics!

Calvan and Ho-ly bloody murder! for the love of all that is natural and good! Really like this concept, would love to battle this duo sometime.

A child trapped inside his own little world. Dang! can't wait to see how this'll play out in later battles! As for critique, be sure to use "!"s and " ' "s for the text next time, to keep ourselves from confusing on how their dialogue plays out.