arrow_back
Intro Story
This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.
Characters in this Comic

Comments (10)

Heathen's avatar
Heathen
All-Rounder
8 years ago
This is one of those character concepts everyone wishes they'd thought of first. By everyone, I at least mean me. Gears turnin' now.
Posted on Intro Story battle

PyrasTerran's avatar
PyrasTerran
Writer
8 years ago
hey hey hey I think there are some places where the colors are too dark without any hilights and the lines and details of your characters get a little lost (it's most prevalent in page 1, and it makes it a little hard to see what's going on) Is the shift of the color off the lines on page 4 panel 4 intentional? It looks like an accident O: I'm not keen on the lady's run in page 4 panel 1, it kinda looks like she's running backwards to me Aside from this stuff, this comic is really ace and the color choices are great for the voodoo vibe (I would have also found green accents acceptable) If you haven't already (i'm sure you already took a gander) you should definitely look at the colors and props and environment for Dr. Facilier "the shadow man" from Princess & the Frog~
Posted on Intro Story battle

Pita (Slowly getting back into it)'s avatar
Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
All-Rounder
8 years ago
I'm going to be talking from two different perspectives--one from a resident of Louisiana and one from a newcomer to VOID. Kozi, you know I'm a fan of your comics. You got some nice inking and coloring, and the writing is a joy to read. I like the little nod to local lingo (Let the good times roll indeed!). It feels like he's a part of Cajun culture without shoehorning the fact, and it's been nice to see examples like this and The Princess and the Frog as opposed to Water Boy's Farmer Fran. The phonetic spelling of Remy's dialog is easy to read and sound out, and I like the compromise you made on how the words are spelled phonetically. You've said there's some nods to older VOID continuities. Without this, I would have anticipated the reveal of the monstrous portrait in the first page as foreshadowing of a foe to come. Maybe it will be? If it plays a part in the future, I hope there's enough exposition not to just inform newcomers of the situation but to also refresh the minds of veteran members without it sounding like as "As You Know" moment. I'm looking forward to how Remy takes on this city!
Posted on Intro Story battle

Corn Of The Breads's avatar
Corn Of The Breads
All-Rounder
8 years ago
it is intresting to see a character that could be potentially unstoppable to most humans and things with comparable physiology on first inspection it seems pretty impossible to really go toe to toe with someone immune to damage, but characters who use nonlethal force could be intresting to see and things that lack any similar biology would be intresting to see as well?
Posted on Intro Story battle

Radji's avatar
Radji
All-Rounder
8 years ago
Kurt: "GOD DAMNIT REMY !!" That new cajun bronco is EXCATLY what we needed with the approaching halloween hahahaha His powers seems troublesome hmmmm RADJI RUN WRITTING COUNTER MESURES
Posted on Intro Story battle

Chimaeric's avatar
Chimaeric
All-Rounder
8 years ago
[quote]...let it go
Posted on Intro Story battle

Chimaeric's avatar
Chimaeric
All-Rounder
8 years ago
You guys trying to revive Mortido or somethin...? HE'S DEAD ALREADY. LET IT GO
Posted on Intro Story battle

Kozispoon's avatar
Kozispoon
All-Rounder
8 years ago
First of all, Ohhh my gosh a character from me. Of all people. FINALLY. For those of you interested in VOID throwbacks, the tower these two knuckleheads stumbled into belonged to the legendary Doc Pye, who inspired the creepy old painting found in that tower study http://entervoid.com/view.php?id=1513&side=2&iid=4 The grim events that transpired within that tower Lucrezia so cryptically refers to can be found in Choleric's radical death match battle linked below. Enjoy some void history! :D http://entervoid.com/view.php?id=2728&side=2&iid=01
Posted on Intro Story battle

Fred's avatar
Fred
All-Rounder
8 years ago
Ah! So cute! Cute little dark magic murders. I like that.
Posted on Intro Story battle

Animeshen's avatar
Animeshen
All-Rounder
8 years ago
i love him i love this i love you
Posted on Intro Story battle