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Before the Hellstorm
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Uploaded September 30, 2016
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Animeshen
Colorist
9 years ago
I am both hype and INTIMIDATED by this amazing comic, you gonna take us on a hell of a ride! hope i can keep up!
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Rhimwill
All-Rounder
9 years ago
Oh man! I have been so looking forward to seeing what you're gonna do with this storyline! I can not wait to see what you've got planned! 8D That falling asleep/nightmare sequence was super well executed, btw. Also, thanks for the cameo <3 And man, I gotta know where Dolly shops for her plushies 8I
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Jackster
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9 years ago
Kozispoon: Speaking of rooms- is Dolly living on her own in the GirlPower mansion? With such a whimsical room to spy, when she looks out the window at the overgrown lawn and decaying shell of the mansion, it kind of makes you feel a bit sorry for her. Is Dolly just a ghost roaming the halls of a void that once was? About that. I have been thinking of moving Dolly into the Lady Vanity Facility as of lately since Girl Power, as you already know, has disbanded since just about every artist that had their character in GP has already left Void and moved on. So I'm setting up a little story where almost all the members left the mansion and moved on with their lives; Dolly is now the only member living all alone in the mansion. And as you can see, the mansion is falling apart after years without maintenance. With the GP members gone, and now Levi gone missing, Dolly has no one to help her with her little demon problem and is now depressed from it. The more reason Dolly needs new friends.
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Kozispoon
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9 years ago
JACKSTER- If you were aiming for hype for your upcoming battle, you definitely got it. Color me intrigued! And not just about the over arching plot either. It takes skill to make something as mundane as an establishing shot of a rooms interior to be interesting, but you made it happen customizing Dolly's bedroom into something skin to a kids shrine for void itself. I even spied some plushies of the new kids from the invitational. Dolly definitely keeps her toys current! Speaking of rooms- is Dolly living on her own in the GirlPower mansion? With such a whimsical room to spy, when she looks out the window at the overgrown lawn and decaying shell of the mansion, it kind of makes you feel a bit sorry for her. Is Dolly just a ghost roaming the halls of a void that once was? I'm not so sure the overly long scrolling page was successful (because once I skimmed past enough black I wondered if it was a mistake and almost turned the page midway), but despite the threat of almost missing it, what we find lurking at the bottom is definitely a payoff.
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JCee
Inker
9 years ago
Fantastic comic! I can't wait to see what happens for poor Dolly. Also, thanks for the little cameo!
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zee
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9 years ago
Another fantastic comic! This is such a great way to set the mood. I am on the edge of my seat for more!! Also loved the cameos, so cute. :D
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G.Lo
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9 years ago
Love the limited color pallette goin on! Looking fiporward to seeing Dolly's upcoming spoopy adventures!
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Charlie
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9 years ago
This was rad as hell dude, but you always make quality stuff so that is kind of a given haha!
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Ish
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9 years ago
Dude holy fuck this is the first time in my life I've been jumpscared by a webcomic! Amazing work as always!
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otakutaylor
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9 years ago
Dawww, poor dolly! Great work on the environment and her room, (totally not biased...) and on your control of the colors and lights, like where they show up on Dolly during the different moments.
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Fred
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9 years ago
Excellent as always jackster. The colors are kept efficient, the read is engaging the expressions are ace. At the very end Dolly looks a bit wonky with her head kind of not quite fitting on there, but otherwise it's really nice. I loved exploring her room with all the voidling plushies and posters, and the dreamy bit was simple while getting the point perfectly across.
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Jackster
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9 years ago
Hang on a minute. The custom thumbnails I sent in are missing. EDIT: There they are. Enjoy, people.
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Corn Of The Breads
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9 years ago
All the small Cameos are pretty amazing and the comic has a great somber tone to most of it which gives it a nice juxtaposition between character and subject matter.
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Jackster
All-Rounder
9 years ago
Uploaded. Just to let everyone know, I won't be able to set-up my battle with Shen and Nina until mid-October at least. I'm going to be visiting my home state with my sister for the most of the beginning of October, therefore I won't have enough time to get my comic done if the battle were to start immediately.
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Animeshen
Colorist
9 years ago
omg i am so not ready XD HYPE TO READ THIS THO
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Jackster
All-Rounder
9 years ago
This will be a 5-page prologue to my upcoming battle with Shen and Nina in October. I set the date here to match the date that this comic will take place in.
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