Kent: Raygun you're a racist and technically to yourself too. But I died at the "I'm sure" panel with his cute angry eyebrows Elge: congrats on being able to complete you're story dude! Very much enjoyed.

Damn kent that was really entertaining XD I was really getting into it!!

Kent: Honestly theres not much to say about this. Your presentation is as good as usual with some nice lineart and paneling. I've noticed you draw Wizzie in a different outfit each time she appears in your comics, I don't have anything to say about that I just think it's a nice little detail. Story wise I can only say that I wish you could have prolonged the fight with Ray and Lawson a little to make it a bit more entertaining, other than that it's well enough on it's own. Also It's cool to see the Danger Rangers slowly growing in numbers so I'm interested to see if that goes anywhere for them. Elge: I feel your pacing is what you really need to improve on, I've noticed you tend to jump into things without properly building up to them. For instance when Miller reveal's Lawson's identity and Raygun immediately attacks him it feels like a good chunk of that scene is left out. Don't you think with a reveal like that we should have also gotten a reaction from the other rangers and Lawson himself or actually see Raygun pull out his gun before he shot it? Don't present situations like these without drawing out the sequence of actions that leads up to them, otherwise it'll just break up the flow of the story. Other than that I'd say try to experiment angel shots to make them more varied and to keep things visually interesting.

MrKent: hahaha You're BOTH roasted !! Elge: MAN ray is a dick here

YOOOOO Im for this!!

MISTER KENT and his All-Star Funkadelic Jambox: Moar werewoofs and werewoof huntin' Moar hairy shirtless battles This is my vow You know what. Yes

Moar werewoofs and werewoof huntin' Moar hairy shirtless battles This is my vow