@Coatl, thank you for recommendations! I will definitely check them out!
@ Pyras, thanks for the clarification! I can definitely give that a shot next time!
@ Crocostyle, thanks man! :D Cant wait to see yours!!
Thank you all for all the feedback and tips. I will work on all of it for my next entry. And thank you for taking the time to read the comic ^_^
Congrats on getting in! Your character has an exciting future ahead of him I can feel it. I'm a bit behind but I'll get mine done soon. In the meantime, good luck on your future fights! :D
yo dumorte, you should read Love and Rockets, you may like the artwork on it, Lucha Libre. I alos recommend books by Vilpuu and Micheal Hampton to help you with your anatomy, and Scott Robertson for perspective.
@Julz thank you for the tips!
I did draw that sign in :( maybe just because of the colors it looks out of place? I was purposely trying to make it stand out but I guess I need to find a way to make it stand out while simultaneously fitting with the background.
Hands are definitely something I need to work on. Ill give your tip a shot!
The tiny white lines bothered the hell out of me too. I noticed it's a mix of my scans and my coloring. I tried to delete as much as I could in GIMP but clearly it wasn't enough lol. Still learning the program so i'm sure it will just get better with time.
Thank you very much for your critiques! I will work on it all, I promise! :D
Yay nice entry!
Things to work on:
Page 4 panel 4, the sign the audience member is holding up looks out of place. Next time try to just draw it in so it fits in with the background.
Those beers are SO photorealistic, they are too realistic XD I see why everyone thought (me included) they were shopped in. As you can see, consistancy is key!
Lots of hidden, crossed, ball hands. Jest draw 100 hands a week until you feel comfortable with them.
There are tiny white lines around everything. Is this from the way you color? Is that airbrushing I see? I would recommend downloading an art program with a variety of brushes and tools.
What I liked:
Nice perspectives! Great angles and moves! FULL COLOR YESSS glorious.
Hey all, a very important note that a fellow Voider pointed out and I had to clarify.
Those beers in the last panel of page 4 are drawn. Not picture cut-outs. I was testing what I can do to make something look realistic and the result was those beers. (I spent about on hour on just those lol)
Just don't want anyone thinking that those are pictures :/
@Dino Nebitt thank you man. I definitely will work hard to make my art better.
@Shen >_< dont hurt me. lol
@OberonGoat yesssss les doo iiitttt
The artwork is mostly just serviceable, and there are a few spots where the dialogue order is difficult to decipher, but your camera angles and the clear readability of your action more than make up for those shortcomings. Getting better at drawing is easy. Being able to make a solid comic is hard. You've got it where it counts more, and of that, i'm jealous.
Hoorayyyy!! Thanks Jay!
Just want to let those of you who take the time to read this that this is my first comic ever. Haha. (im not counting the silly ones i made in middle school).
Thank you all who have helped me ease my nerves about creating this guy. Like you have no idea how much anxiety I had working in this. I worked very Very VERY hard on this comic and I for one am happy with the results.
I am open to all opinions and suggestions because as you can tell, I am not a pro! Haha. I used GIMP to color the comic. It was my first time using that program (Or any art program) so I'm sure it can only get better.
I can't wait to start interacting with the Void citizens!! :D
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